I see what you did there, using a thing from lilo and stitch. "Family means nobody gets left behind" hahaha. I loved it, it was the update I have been dying for.
Oh my god!!!! Hahahaha how exciting! I like how you've done this compared to then your original story. Having Kana and Hinata bond earlier on in the story will make an even bigger impact later! Keep up the awesome work, can't wait for the next update XD
Hello from comment swap! Not usually my cup of tea, to be honest, but I'm happy to read a bit and give some feedback: I thought your writing was very good! The descriptions were vivid and I could picture the scene well. The layout compliments the story well though the text can be a little hard to read on the background of the moon from time to time. But overall, good job, the writing is quality.
great story! i love it cant wait til your next update! :D also if you like naruto and the band black veil brides i have a story with both so check it out :D