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  • smoke-and-fire

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    @ jlyEchelonMCRmy
    yea! that's why i rewrote it :D hahaa. i was literally obsessed with the second one and UGHH. I WANT A CUTE BOY. but don't we alllllll. (or girl or whatever floats your boat) hahaa :)
    October 27th, 2012 at 03:37am
  • jly94

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    I prefer the second one. The first seemed to rushed and unrealistic whereas in the second you built up a really believable friendship as a foundation for the relationship.

    Loved them both though (well, they featured Martin, how could I not?! ;) )

    Jen xx
    October 25th, 2012 at 11:10pm
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    Mr. Green This is wonderful!
    June 25th, 2012 at 07:46pm
  • Erinsays

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    I love it!
    June 11th, 2012 at 06:13pm
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