I know this should have come earlier. But you know I'm sorry!
I like the story though. It seems interesting. Especially Burn's character herself. There'll be a lot to find out about her and I can't wait to read how it will go on. c: Because we don't want Brian staying so pussy-ish, right? :D Your writing is great, honey. <3 You give just the right amount of details! Great. :3