Don't Tell Me You've Gone Astray - Comments

  • firearnok

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    This was a perfect story. If there actually is a sequel later, I'll be forever grateful. Again I really love your writing and yeah, keep it up <3
    June 25th, 2012 at 02:29pm
  • firearnok

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    Shit Gerard just fucking spill it you turd. Sigh. Do you see what you're doing to my mood? It changes at every new line I read. xD Ok, let's go for chapter 7. (Sorry for the spam :B)
    June 25th, 2012 at 02:21pm
  • firearnok

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    I fucking love the atmosphere, really. I don't know how you make it, or if it's my brain who's making it up, but I don't know, it feels so realistic, just like something that would happen between any couple. You totally captured the emotions that should be felt and put them into words, and not everyone can do that *claps*
    Chapter 4 = awesome.
    June 25th, 2012 at 02:14pm
  • firearnok

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    Ok, you are the only author that makes my inside voice scream like mad. Chapter three is making me flail, sigh I don't know why. You are an amazing authooor.
    June 25th, 2012 at 02:08pm
  • firearnok

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    OH MY GOD YOU DIDN'T TELL ME YOU UPDATED MAN! WHYY? I'm going to read the amazingness out of this story ok? Ok. <3
    June 25th, 2012 at 02:04pm
  • The Color Abi

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    Lovely ending <3
    June 25th, 2012 at 03:16am
  • The Color Abi

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    Amazing update!
    June 22nd, 2012 at 02:42am
  • YoungandLoadedKid

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    ME LIKEY! :D
    I want more. Please?
    :)
    June 20th, 2012 at 08:05pm
  • CoffeeJar

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    *New Reaaader* hehe I actually love this so much! Please continue with it xox
    June 20th, 2012 at 11:00am
  • The Color Abi

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    It won't end well, no :(
    June 20th, 2012 at 04:15am
  • The Color Abi

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    I love, love, love the new layout!

    Maybe it is best that Gerard moves on Cry
    June 19th, 2012 at 04:07am
  • The Color Abi

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    Poor Frankie.
    N'aww :(
    June 18th, 2012 at 02:15am
  • Captain Mars

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    Thanks everybody! this was supposed to be a oneshot so I just kind of have to make it up as I go along. I think I know where it's going now though. <3
    June 17th, 2012 at 04:16am
  • All My Desolate Soul

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    I really like the feel of this, it's very sad in a way. And conflicting. And I don't know it that just made sense >.<
    June 17th, 2012 at 04:11am
  • The Color Abi

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    I want them to get back together.
    N'aww.
    June 17th, 2012 at 04:08am
  • The Color Abi

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    I love, love, love this so far!
    And that's coming from someone who doesn't like Frerard too much.
    June 16th, 2012 at 04:00am
  • Captain Mars

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    I think I might actually keep going even though I'm not sure where I'm going with this one. Hmm...
    June 16th, 2012 at 02:13am
  • firearnok

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    I vote you keep going tooooooo!!
    June 16th, 2012 at 02:02am
  • harlequin. girl.

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    this was cute. was it only a two-shot? i vote that you keep going.
    June 15th, 2012 at 07:18am
  • Captain Mars

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    Thanks <3
    June 12th, 2012 at 01:32am