Shit Gerard just fucking spill it you turd. Sigh. Do you see what you're doing to my mood? It changes at every new line I read. xD Ok, let's go for chapter 7. (Sorry for the spam :B)
I fucking love the atmosphere, really. I don't know how you make it, or if it's my brain who's making it up, but I don't know, it feels so realistic, just like something that would happen between any couple. You totally captured the emotions that should be felt and put them into words, and not everyone can do that *claps* Chapter 4 = awesome.
Ok, you are the only author that makes my inside voice scream like mad. Chapter three is making me flail, sigh I don't know why. You are an amazing authooor.