You're Doing It Wrong - Comments

Write more! I'm excited to see what happens between them. I like how you depict their relationship and how they interact. And I really like Nikki's calmer, sympathetic side.

Update? Please?

Oh please write ore of this!! I absolutely adore it!! Amazing job so far (:

It was kind of cool reading this because I'm listening to Sixx AM right now but, it was really good and I can't wait to read the other parts :)