Love the Way You Lie - Comments

zayn better not be where kayla's going to be....
imma flip a couch.

Great chapter! I have a bad feeling about the boys visiting since Zayn spotted her at the store. I don't think it will end good. :p

If all the boys are there now, I have a feeling Zayn will do something to her. I have a real bad feeling about this.

I still love it though, update soon! (:

Yay! you finally updated!!! Awe, Niall and Kayla are too adorable<3 I'm glad they finally got away from everything. STOP THINKING ABOUT ZAYN, KAYLA - OMG. Anyways, I loved it. (:
Don't make us wait too long for the next one, can't wait for more <3

You updated! Which is freakin' awesome because I've been waiting far too long haha.

Dawww Niall is so cute and sweet! I hope nothing is going to ruin their plans. THEY ARE SO PERECT. AND NO KAYLA, DON'T THINK ABOUT ZAYN, OKAY? Zayn is a bad boy. He's a no no.

Louis's of course going on brother mode. Hehehe. It's so cute how he cares so much for Kayla <3

Glad El and Louis are good too! <3 Teehee

Stop thinking about Zayn. It hurts me that she's hurting because Zayn abused her. She loved him, but he was being a jerk. Niall does treat her better, so I hope they stay forever. I don't want Zayn ruining this relationship.

They are so cute! I loved it! c:

Hope you update soon. Thanks for telling us c:

wow this chapter was idk awsome kinda but im slightly mad at niall for hitting her

This chapter was crazy! I couldn't believe Niall hit her. Hope he doesn't do that again. I swear if he does.....

LOUIS?! Oh gosh, that was a huge shocker. Dammmmmn. I'm still processing my thoughts on that.

I'm even more angry at Zayn. This is getting out of control.

Over all, I can't wait for the next one. But I have a feeling Zayn will be whereeverr Niall and Kalya will be.

Oh, wow. Good update!
Please update soon?(:
I can't wait for more.

I don't like the fact that Kayla has to lie to them about Zayn. ;c

RAWWWR. Perrie's a btch here. I can't believe she has the guts to tell Kayla that she'd be a bad mother. AND Zayn telling Perrie about it in the first place! GAH, this story makes me angry. But I love it.

Okay, so I'm just going to get out of the way right now that this really isn't my kind of story, simply because it has a lot of sex in it, and sex scenes make me kind of uncomfortable. Even though, granted, your sex scenes aren't as graphic as some I've read by accident. Hahaha.

But because you asked me to, I read the entire thing. And I think, overall, your writing is solid. There were some problems in the earlier chapters with you separating dialogue into separate paragraphs with a space in between, but you fixed it in the later ones.

And, also, there should be a comma at the end of a bit of dialogue before the ending quotation mark if you have a "he said" or something similar in there.

Example: "I know. I'm sorry," I said.

You tend to leave the comma out, which is a totally common mistake.

I also caught a couple of homonym errors, but those aren't a major deal. But other than that, you definitely have a solid story on your hands. :) Also, the layout is fantastic. The droplets of blood on the side are very eerie.

I hope that Zayn's finally out of Kayla's life for good. :)

good update! I can't wait for more.
update soon? :D

lovved it lol

SHIT MAN, he did shag that girl. SMH

Awe.
Good update c:
More soon?!

OH HELL NO NIALL. NO. NO. NO. NO.

PERRIE IN! This just got some serious shit happening. Gah! Update soon, alright? ;)

Oh, wow.
Intense chapter!
Update soon!

I basically just sat here and read the whole story, which takes allot. So you really got my attention with it! It's realy good and I can't wait to read some more of it(:

I'm surprised he didnt hurt her.

I AM SO HAPPY THIS WAS UPDATED. I JUMPED. :)

"Your supposed to be packing not eating." HAHAHa oh Niall.

SHE SHOULDVE FOLLOWED.

SHE SHOULD HAVE NOT LET HIM IN. DAMMMMIT. Zayn and his charms.

Please update soon! I beg.