The sex scene was pretty okay. I must admit it was a bit awkward, but it's better than a few others I've read in this past week. You'll get better! Anyways, update soon! <3
For a minute there I thought she was going to get jumped or kidnapped by the other bitch of a queen! Anyways, I do like the new character. I'm a bit suspicious of him though... Maybe I'm just being overly paranoid as usual. As long as he doesn't come between Cain and Nichole, I'll be happy as fudge! But that's no fun at all! Play with our emotions like a story should! Update soon! <3
Comment swap! This is so interesting! A band of vampires? That's pretty sexy. I think you've got a good thing going here. You are a very talented writer. And I think the layout is awesome. The titles are cool to. :)
The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!