I agree with Lucy. She does need to stop running away from everything. Why does she do that!? Stand the hell up for yourself! I swear, if that was me, i would have punched the hell out of Liz. I would've done it on day one. Lucy's letting her slip, and get in her face a little too much for me. Beat her ass, Lucy.
Edit. I was glad for a bit of action instead of the filler-ish feel some of the more recent chapters have had, but it's very messy, filled with quite a few errors, and it was difficult to read at times. A little revision would go a long way on this chapter. :)
The way i look at it Lucy, Liz, Gavin, and Ricky all have fucked up priorities tht needs to get straighten out sooo everyone is to blame if Liz and Ricky break up from Ricky and Lucy to havin sex to Liz and Gavin havin sex and gettin her pregnant sooo yea u all need to be slapped more than once fucking idiots, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Wowzers, just. Wow. Great chapter. I really love this story. It's one of my favorites on this site. I think it'd be cool to see another chapter in Ricky's POV, or even Emily's or Gavin's. :) Keep it up.
I want to say "shit has hit te fan," but I realize that, a) that doesn't even cover it, and b) the worse is yet to come.
intense chapter!! I've missed this story soo much! it's probably my favorite one on Mibba (: really love where you're going with this and I like the mystery coffee shop guy (; I feel like its only a matter of time before Gavin calls Lucy apologizing, saying how he didn't know what he was saying because he was worried abou what he's going to do. not sure how Lucy's gonna respond to that. but I'm really curious about how all of this will play out, 'cause as of right now, it's fair game and anything can(and will) happen!
Holy shit Liz is pregnant. I feel bad for Gavin cause now he will have to put up with Liz and her shit. Like I know it is his fault but it still sucks for him. I think Gavin and Lucy need to apologise to each other.
OMG!! I think Liz should be at the door trying to get Gavin. But Gavin doesn't want her because he wants Olivia, while Olivia is dating this Fancy guy. That leaves Ricky alone, and Lucy. But Lucy has to get over Ricky. So he comes back because he feels played that Liz wants "Lucy's boyfriend" and it turns into a big drama bc Lucy won't want to be his second choice.
Wow. I'm so bored right now. But I love this story <33333333
WHO IS IT?!! VAMPIRE ATTACK?! Just kidding ;D Suppose it could be Liz...or it COULD be Ricky but he might look like he was beaten up or something (by Liz, that would be hilarious :L). Hm....who else? Doubt it's Olivia...might be Emily...or CJ.....I JUST DON'T KNOW! But I'm pretty sure it won't be her Dad. Gavin's advice was a little harsh, but true I think and he's only thinking of what's best for Lucy. It just kind of feels like she's always the one who gets fucked over. And she hardly complains! Think that's why I like her so much :) Great chapter, I know what you mean about that 'off' feeling, I've had that for a few days....Hope you feel better soon, looking forward to the next update! <3