1) Beginning. - Comments

Now, a trophy would be nice. Since you mentioned it, haha.

I can't get over who brilliant these are. They honestly amaze me every time.

ai'sdopf Oh man. These guys...you are so freaking good at writing these :) i love them!

Every One Direction story is amazinggggg. I loved it! So adorable... and I could just picture Louis... unffff. Hahah

Another comment swapper here! Ah yes, I’ve heard of these upload-a-drabble-everyday-for-thirty-days things. Personally, I would never be able to do that. Guess I don’t have that kind of patience! HAHA Anywho, I do like how this story is going so far and even though there are more than a few grammar mistakes, it is still a great story. I also wanted to compliment you on your layout. It doesn’t take away from the story, but yet it is very elegant and easy to see. Keep on writing and you my friend, just got another subscriber :)

Oh my god, that was so damn adorable, and so sweet and I just can't stop grinning. It's just so perfect and I loved the parts in brackets a lot for some reason.

Gaaaaahhhhh!!! *insert one of Louis' idiotic faces here*

THIS MAKE ME TURN TO MUSH! Firstly, it's about Louis. Secondly, he's half-naked. Okay, I know this is a fic, but I can imagine it!

I adore each of their bromances, but I'm leaning towards Lilo now. Larry's bromance once fascinated me, but I find Lilo very... endearing

I think that was adorable. ;awriosfgja And now I picture them shoving ice cream in each other's faces...hm.

Honestly speaking, I didn't keep track of the days. It's already afternoon, June 19th where I'm at, so, I'd guess you're always late in my timezone, haha!

Okay, I'm going to be little critical here as I see a bit of mistakes here and there.

His shoes are the usual trainers he wears, but tonight they are an unbelievably bright white color in contrast against the black.
Try rephrasing
His shoes are the usual trainers he wears, but tonight they are an unbelievably bright white in contrast against the black.
Omit the color, since you've already mentioned white.

The two approach them and Niall says, “Wow, dis is crazy, right?” while making exasperated breathy sounds.
I think you meant 'this' instead of 'dis'.

Something orange suddenly attacks and sticks to Liam’s vest.
Okay, I know it's the flying nerf dart, but is there another word to use instead of attack? Like Something orange suddenly flew by and sticks to Liam's vest?

I realized that you're writing in the present tense and I was itching to change it all into past tense. I'm mentally slapping myself right now because of that

And of course, well done on the chapter. Haha, Liam is 'Daddy Direction' after all. When I first saw them, I thought he was the oldest among the guys. Imagine the shock and disbelief when I found out it was Louis.

And do take a look at this: One Direction look smart at GQ Men of the Year Awards. This was the first thing I thought of when I saw the title chapter.

It's not late for me!

And nerf guns, only the boys, honestly. I couldn't stop laughing.

And yeah, um, chapter four of TD coming up. Awesome.

it's not late for me. :) half an hour left!! haha i liked it ! It made me laugh a lot!

Yeah, wasn't thinking smoking when I read flame, but you know, it makes sense. Haha.

Well done.

The first thing which came to mind when I read the word flame, was that you're going to write about the boys' girlfriends. Like, Harry's ex-flame or something. It didn't even occur to me about Zayn's smoking habit. Ha. Shows how weird my way of thinking is.

I really like it if you don't mention the boys' names in the drabble. Makes it all the more suggestive.

I like these a lot! They're really good!

I'm mentioned in the authors' comments? *incoherent speech* Thank you!

Honestly speaking, Niall being called a 'special snowflake' is something new to me. And the 'Haze' chapter? BRILLIANT. I love the simplicity of it and how much information you can pack in such a short drabble. Zayn's frigging exhausted that everything was hazy to him.

I love this!

P/S: Tumblr is like, the second google or wikipedia as you can find all sorts of current news (true & false) on it. I have NO idea how fandom trivia can spread like wildfire on Tumblr...

No problem, doll.

I can totally empathise with how tired they must get. And the way you wrote this one actually made it seem like he was tired, like the random connections he made. Love it.

Oh yeah, I've heard the snowflake thing before. It's definitely a bit strange. Short, sweet and to the point, love it.

And a peacock? God, what the hell?

Oh god, someone's leg jittering has to be the most irritating thing in the world. My brother does it all the time and if I'm nervous about something it just makes me more nervous.

Can't wait for the next!

This is pretty short, but it's so straight to the point, you don't even have to explain. Hence, ending my very short comment as well

Snowflake is next?!

I'm feeling very slow right now, I didn't realize that you're actually writing about a band until the second chapter. Even after the banner and the first chapter talking about the guys performing. So pardon my slowness, but I have no idea who these guys are and I'm not really one for drabbles. Still the idea behind writing thirty drabbles in thirty days is a very sweet idea. Good luck with it :)

I'm gonna admit, I'm not a huge One Direction fan. I'm not a hater, like I think that their music is good (I really do like the What Makes You Beautiful song) and I think they're probably great guys, but I don't know, I just didn't get caught up in the 1D craziness over them. That being said though, I think this story? is interesting. I like how you're showing how real they are and how they're trying their best to be the best because they don't want to let anyone down. It's nice :)