I absolutely loved everything about this story. It was very cute. The layout fits perfectly, and the font is incredibly readable, which is a fantastic (and rare, nowadays) thing in my opinion. You are brilliant at descriptive writing, and your style of writing itself is very unique and flowed really well. Keep up the great work. :D
This story is adorable! The whole idea of Brian being in a somewhat happy family makes me giggle! Its just so goddamned cute! And, I must say, your writing style is unique, and special! And, I found everything about this story addictive!
Comment swap brought me here and not to the prequel. I don't usually like band fics, so I am going to comment more on your style. I love your descriptions, there is just enough to put the reader right into the story. Even though I knew nothing about the characters, I could still tell where they were and who they were just by the amount of detail that you give. I wish you the best and I will recommend your story to other Avenged Sevenfold writers/readers.