Ok, I thought I was crying when he died? no. I can't even breathe. Oh My Gosh. You are amazing, I can't wait for another update. I now have to try to get to sleep before work and I can't stop crying. lol.
Well, I do like the title. But the layout I have a huge problem with. I feel like the picture you're using for the background, the stairs with the lyrics on them, should be the main picture; and you shouldn't be using red and black, maybe a simple grey as the background color and colors surrounding the main picture? I don't know. I do think its cliche that Grace was a perfect innocent girl until she met the cliche bad boy though.
I don't really like the back round much, I think you should use that picture in the summary, like in the middle, but that's just me. Hahah. But other than that, I like this. It's cute. And I like how Grace isn't so miss perfect anymore. Reminds me of myself, I was always so innocent, and now... not so much, aha. But keep going with this :)
Aww that's so cute that she has a crush on her best friend. I'm really getting sick of her mother's expectations for her daughter. How does kyle assume that she is perfect over dialogue? LOL! This kid is funny. I'm glad Grace put him in his place. It seems to me that Grace needs Kyle's help for him to understand her. I hope Grace can show the world who she really is and want to be. ADD MORE!