She Has a Stairway to Heaven for Sale. - Comments

  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    I loved it, it was amazing i'm so happy I found this story!
    July 12th, 2012 at 02:41am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    Ok, I thought I was crying when he died? no. I can't even breathe. Oh My Gosh. You are amazing, I can't wait for another update. I now have to try to get to sleep before work and I can't stop crying. lol.
    July 11th, 2012 at 10:18am
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    I'm crying.
    July 10th, 2012 at 02:13am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    I LOVED IT!!!!!! awwwwwwwww :)
    July 8th, 2012 at 02:19am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    LOVE IT!! *SINGING!!!*
    July 5th, 2012 at 08:39am
  • lyndsifer.

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    Well, I do like the title. But the layout I have a huge problem with. I feel like the picture you're using for the background, the stairs with the lyrics on them, should be the main picture; and you shouldn't be using red and black, maybe a simple grey as the background color and colors surrounding the main picture? I don't know. I do think its cliche that Grace was a perfect innocent girl until she met the cliche bad boy though.
    July 5th, 2012 at 07:47am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    I LOVED IT!
    July 4th, 2012 at 07:42am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    YES PERFECT!!!! I'll be in the passenger seat :)
    July 2nd, 2012 at 08:38am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    yay more more more!!!
    July 1st, 2012 at 05:46am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    LOVE IT!!!! Please update, I am subscribed and WAITING!!!
    June 26th, 2012 at 09:12am
  • Dim witted fool

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    I don't really like the back round much, I think you should use that picture in the summary, like in the middle, but that's just me. Hahah.
    But other than that, I like this. It's cute.
    And I like how Grace isn't so miss perfect anymore. Reminds me of myself, I was always so innocent, and now... not so much, aha. But keep going with this :)
    June 23rd, 2012 at 11:55am
  • Stonyhearted

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    Kyle completely turned Grace around! I guess she's not 'perfect' anymore!
    June 20th, 2012 at 10:25pm
  • Stonyhearted

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    Aww that's so cute that she has a crush on her best friend. I'm really getting sick of her mother's expectations for her daughter. How does kyle assume that she is perfect over dialogue? LOL! This kid is funny. I'm glad Grace put him in his place. It seems to me that Grace needs Kyle's help for him to understand her. I hope Grace can show the world who she really is and want to be. ADD MORE!
    June 15th, 2012 at 08:16pm
  • Oh.Aish!

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    I love this. So very much. You must update. Yes. Yes. yes~
    June 13th, 2012 at 09:38pm
  • Stonyhearted

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    I love it already. I feel so sorry for Grace. She has to live up to that 'perfect' image. Please write more!
    June 13th, 2012 at 01:56am