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  • headrushxreeta

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    Super excited about this. I remember reading the original and I loved it!
    October 21st, 2012 at 10:52pm
  • Star Angel

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    update soon please
    October 21st, 2012 at 10:18pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, damn it I'm like torn becuz Matt had to leave Kari so tht he won't go to jail when he could have just took her in the car and drive her to the ambulance and say tht ur girlfriend has been shot, u can lie to the nurses and say tht u and Kari was being mugged and u went after the guy and he went to shot at u and it grazed ur shoulder and hit Kari in the chest, boom there u go a lie to save ur girlfriend, now Kari is shot up, bleeding from the head, with a dectective, I just hope tht Kari wakes up and Dectective Walter tells her tht he called Matt to let him kno tht she is in the hospital and she is alive and tht she is asking for u, I just hope tht Kari understands and doesn't get pissed off at Matt, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 21st, 2012 at 08:35pm
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    YAY! I loved this story when Rae was writing it so I know I'm definitely gonna love it when you write it. So looking forward to the next chapter already!!
    October 21st, 2012 at 06:50pm
  • antivist.

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    OMG! And it has begun! Wow, well I have torn feelings cause I know 'Andy' who I think plays Detective Walters from Spartacus and I can't hate him, although I think that is not going to matter here... excuse my ranting haha anyways, this was a great start, can't wait for more.
    October 21st, 2012 at 04:35pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Yay!!! I am so happy that this story is back. I missed it too much. But I'm happy its continuing on.
    <3 Michele
    October 21st, 2012 at 04:27pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Amazing first chapter :D
    I can't wait to read more soon
    October 21st, 2012 at 03:45pm
  • Shadowsgirl

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    so happy that your starting this!!!
    I love it:X
    October 21st, 2012 at 01:08pm
  • Mother Jellybean

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    I like this :)
    October 21st, 2012 at 09:27am
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    Amazing just like the rest of your work :). I can't for more this is soooo great
    October 21st, 2012 at 09:27am
  • Meganator

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    ERMAHGEARDDD Im so happy that she let you continue this story. I loved it from the start when she started writing it and im just pleased that she let you continue it. At least we know the story is in good hands! :) Cant Wait!!
    October 21st, 2012 at 08:54am
  • BriBriSexyTime

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    Ive been waiting for this for so freaking long. I can't even contain my excitement.
    October 21st, 2012 at 08:47am
  • soapy

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    you already know how i feel about this :DD
    October 21st, 2012 at 08:39am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Because taking her with them would have been so difficult...
    Can't wait for more.
    October 21st, 2012 at 08:31am
  • avenging angel

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    Another Matt story yay!!! But yeah! I loved rae's story and I'm sure I'm gonna love this one too! There's already action in it and stuff! Can't wai for the next chapter and see what happens :D
    October 21st, 2012 at 08:26am
  • xXstolenthoughtsXx

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    I was literally thinking about this story and how it disappeared! So glad to hear its back and your taking over. Loved original but can't wait for yours! :)
    October 18th, 2012 at 05:55am
  • blueyes775

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    I cant wait for this story I loved the first part cant wait!
    September 7th, 2012 at 03:09am
  • owlsongs1989

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    Cool :D
    July 4th, 2012 at 04:50am
  • hachie

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    I have fell in love with this story before and I am still in love with it! I can't wait for you to start posting!
    June 26th, 2012 at 07:18am
  • for i have syn

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    Again, you have my absolute permission! (In case someone bitches.) Haha, this will be the first story you use someone's plot. Aw, humor. Anyways, you will so a much much MUCH better and clever job of unraveling this amazing story and I know with a mind like yours, you will make the readers question with suspense!! And smut, hopefully. LoL.

    Oh yeah... I almost forgot: FIRST!
    June 13th, 2012 at 05:12am