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  • RosiePosie08

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    Love this!
    November 5th, 2012 at 05:20pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Oh boy, Matt better go about this the smart way, otherwise he might just scare Kari off. I hope he is able to get through to her though, Chris rubs me the wrong way, i just dont like him.

    <3 Michele
    November 5th, 2012 at 04:59pm
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    Interesting chapter. Looking forward to reading about how Matt will get Kari back. I hope he doesn't resort to kidnapping. Although, he might. Not sure at this point. But I am very intrigued.
    November 5th, 2012 at 04:47pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Chris sure knows how to push Matt's button I mean he knows that Matt is outside watching them but he decides to claim Kari as his own to show Matt that he has want he wants. Christi's sure a dead man in Matt's eyes after touching Kari. I can't wait to see how Matt plans to help get her memory back without Chris finding out. Amazing update :)
    November 5th, 2012 at 04:23pm
  • promisesunkind

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    and so it begins.. YES!
    November 5th, 2012 at 08:47am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, poor Matt and Chris u r a dick and u will die even tho u took Kari in but u r lyin to her and not tellin her the truth about her real life u dick, anyhoo Matt will get Kari, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    November 5th, 2012 at 07:09am
  • xXstolenthoughtsXx

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    I'm so in love with this story! Update again! >:) lol
    November 5th, 2012 at 06:39am
  • avenging angel

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    Oh man Chris definitely knows how to push Matt's buttons huh? And he sure gave Matt a show! Ugh I love this story so much! The many possibilities you take with this story! I honestly can't wait til Matt is face to face with her! Even though she won't remember him!:0
    November 5th, 2012 at 06:04am
  • hachie

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    So Chris wants Shadows to know he has what was his now. I bet he's trying to piss Shadows up so he can mess up and Chris can get him! As much as the smut is very eye popping, I can't wait for when Shadows comes in and reconnects with Kari! I look forward to the next update!
    November 5th, 2012 at 05:55am
  • antivist.

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    Awww fuck yes!
    Team Shadows and Team cocksucking asshole xD
    so personally I'm on the team Shadows, I mean how could I not xD haha c:
    Chris, dude... you're on my black list. I will find you and I will kill you... well Matt will do.
    November 5th, 2012 at 05:44am
  • pawnsinplay

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    Goodness gracious. Chris had sex with Kari knowing full well that Matt was watching. What a dirty little trick! I wonder what Kari will think once she learns the truth about everything. MORE PLEASE.
    November 5th, 2012 at 05:15am
  • Mother Jellybean

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    I love this story! :)
    Update soon
    November 5th, 2012 at 05:10am
  • kaylynnjaeannxox

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    I absolutely love your creativity :)
    You are by far my favorite author on here!
    This story is already pulling me in and making me anxious for the next chapter :)
    November 5th, 2012 at 05:06am
  • JxJx

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    Love this! Please update asap!
    November 5th, 2012 at 04:54am
  • MaryJane_2013

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    Ahhh cant wait for more
    October 30th, 2012 at 07:50pm
  • a venom

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    i can't wait for more and see what code black means
    October 29th, 2012 at 09:15pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love this honey.
    October 29th, 2012 at 06:40am
  • Chels714

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    So happy to have this story ressurected and given new life.. Cannot wait to read more Mr. Green
    October 29th, 2012 at 05:10am
  • headrushxreeta

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    Loooved this chapter! Super excited to see gow Matt.makes his re-apearance! :)
    October 29th, 2012 at 04:18am
  • cheabea91

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    I hope Code Black means Matt is coming for her!! Lol! I think it's kind of unfair that Chris knows who she is and everything and has kept it from her. But I guess that'd be too much to tell someone, she probably wouldn't have believed it. I can't wait to read the next part!!
    October 28th, 2012 at 09:44pm