Tricky Business - Comments

I really like this story. It's not really something in my genre, per say, but it's a nice story. I feel so bad for Vero! I hope she gets over it soon, but any way. Your flow in this story is very nice, and I really like the plot. Sidney and Shea are nice together and I hope they stay that way! There are a few minor mistakes in the story here and there, but that's not really much to worry about. The way that you write, you really do have to keep reading to really get this gist of the whole story, and to be satisfied. I would suggest, maybe proofreading a little more to make sure that there are no mistakes. But hey, I have those troubles all the time in my story as well. Everyone does. I liked your paragraph lengths and chapter lengths. Like I said, this isn't really my genre, so I couldn't really get into it or follow, but it's a very good book so don't stop writing! You have something really nice here and don't stop just because I didn't really get into it. This story has really great potiential! So, I wish you good luck with your story! (:

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So glad about the lockout being finally over!
Great update! Poor Vero :(

amazing as usual ;). No more lockout! woop woop!!!

@ PerttySilly
Haha ok cool :)

@ lexwashere22 funny that you mention that. That's what is to come in next chapter! You think ahead ! Hahhaha :)

I love this! I'm kinda confused is vero preggo or not?

I think they need to talk about their issues instead of bottling them up for so long! Can't wait for more!

Ok, now that is how to make up after a fight!

Loved the update!

update soon!

Wow this is a really great story, I only just started reading it but I couldn't stop until I got up to date, I can't wait for more :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) update soon pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease :-) :-) :-) :-)

Well, that certainly was hot. I like how adventurous these two are becoming in bed. Makes for fun reading!

I think it is a bit unfair for Shea to be angry at Sid for doing his job. She knew what his life was when she got involved and she can't expect him to change now. I fully understand her being sad and missing him, but being angry isn't fair to him. Sidney being gone is something she is going to have to accept, and is something she should have thought about before she agreed to marry him.

That was a very hot chapter - Shea seemed to get more than she bargained for - but I am sure that she was happy. I do like it when Sid gets a little bossy....and I am sure Shea does too.

I am glad that Troy is coming around. In his defense, I am sure he has seen enough girls try and take advantage of Sid, and he just wants to protect his son. But he needs to give Shea a chance to prove herself, without assuming that she is like the rest.

And good for Trina for standing up for Shea.

Cant wait to see what Sid has planned next.

Love this!

Hmmm...I am liking "Controlling Sid". I wonder what other fantasies he is having???? Lucky Shea!

update soon!

Man, Troy is being a real dick. I can understand being protective of Sid - and being skeptical of any girl he was involved with - but he does not have to be so outwardly rude. He should keep it to himself. He should at least entertain the possibility that he has raised Sid correctly and Sid has good judgement.

I am glad that Shea got things going that night - and that Sidney assumed his control...YES!

update soon!

@ soupy Now that would've been embarassing !

I want to know Sid's reaction when he sees the corset!