July 24th, 2012 at 06:37pm
Missing Smiles - Comments
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Ok so I'm not really a Patrick Kane fan. But with that being said, I really like the plot for this story. I'm glad Pat got his memory back, though. Also I think Carly over-reacted a little bit.July 24th, 2012 at 05:20pm
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Definitely think she needs to be happy about the situation, update update update !!July 24th, 2012 at 04:26pm
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I don't know if that was a logical reaction. I mean it's okay for a few minutes, i mean I think anyone would need a few minutes with that, that is a lot to take in at once but I don't think she should be mad at him. He didn't cheat and he was trying to protect her so if she thought that and that crazy girl didn't do anything like she said she would, she should really give him a break and take a few minutes to let everything sink in and get over it. She loves him, he loves her, there was no cheating, and he remembers. Why can't she just be happy with all of that good news? Good update.July 24th, 2012 at 02:41pm
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Carly needs to give pat a break!July 24th, 2012 at 08:08am
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Aww poor Pat. He is just trying so hard...July 24th, 2012 at 07:16am
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loved the update :)
hopefully he breaks the news to Carly soon that he has his memory back!!!July 24th, 2012 at 04:37am -
i did not see the jessica thing coming, i totally thought it was going to be carly! but i can't wait for them to go to greece! still rooting for carly to be preggers though!July 24th, 2012 at 02:21am
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Jon and Jessica did not see that coming. Can't wait until he tells her he has his memory back. Another great update.July 24th, 2012 at 01:28am
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definitely hope she takes patrick's memory coming back in a good way and understands why he kept it from her. love this story!!July 24th, 2012 at 12:53am
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JESSICA? Crazy! Glad it's not Carly though. I hope she doesn't get mad when he finally tells her he remembers everything. Great chapter. love it. can't wait for moreJuly 24th, 2012 at 12:25am
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I'm so shocked! Jon loves Jessica! I thought he loved Erica or Carly. Please update soon!July 23rd, 2012 at 11:50pm
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all caught up on the story!
not really surprised that Jon likes Carly
hopefully he can get over that really soon haha
please update soon :)July 22nd, 2012 at 12:45am -
I was out of town so I'm only just now reading chapter 23 and I loved it!!
by far my favorite so far!!!
can't wait to keep reading!!July 21st, 2012 at 10:32pm -
Hey, there :) Comment swap brought me here!
I didn't read all of the story, I only read the first chapters. But from what I've read, you've got something interesting going on in here! I liked the plot, and I liked that he lost his memory and didn't remember Carly as his girlfriend.
There weren't many mistakes, either, and I think you did a great job overall!
Happy writing :)July 21st, 2012 at 06:39pm -
YES oh thank god. Glad it's not Erica he likes! Loved the countdown to New Years. But I hope she's not preggo. That would just be crazyJuly 21st, 2012 at 03:29pm
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seriously??? This cliff-hanger business is killing me!!! Grat job as always :)July 21st, 2012 at 01:55pm
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It seems like it is Carly but that just seems too obvious. I don't know I kind of still think it is someone else....maybe another sister?July 21st, 2012 at 07:42am
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Another great updat! who does Jon love? It seems like its Carly!!! Loveing the dramaJuly 21st, 2012 at 06:53am
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ahhhhhh who does Jon love?!?!July 21st, 2012 at 06:17am
either way, loved the update :)
please update soon :)