awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! super duper adorable, like omg and that last bit, I DID NOT KNOW THAT! but too cute. really. if the epilogue is not this happy, I'll just die.
CLIFFHANGERS WOMAN! ugh you know what they do to me. Please update soon soon soon or I will jump into the story and put niall and Brittany together myself! :)
Don't bash your writing at the beginning of the chapter, it makes poeple not want to read it! I personally really like this, but completely understand not having the motivation. It's no fun forcing yourself to write, but I like this story a lot so I would love to see you continue it, but if not I hope you write another Niall story you enjoy more!
I really like the idea of this story. It's pretty good so far. I would just say to watch out for little details. There were differences in the texts earlier in the story. And then earlier you said Niall was on floor 6, now he's on floor 7. Just little details. I really like the plot and everything though :) Update soon!
i see that there are CURRENTLY no comments on this so i'll be nice, i like the plot of the story. i really like the idea of having a dream then meeting and yeah...so i like it so far