I'm sorry, it seemed interesting but I couldn't read it with the layout. Try fixing it up so that you have more than three words per line. Again, I'm sorry. I do love anything Harry Potter related usually.
I'm really not a fan of Harry Potter but as comment swap brought me here it'd be unfair to give this story a miss. I read the prologue and it's quite interesting. I'm not really a huge lover of slash - I prefer heterosexual fanfics but that's just my taste. You seem to have written your prologue well though. It's very captivating, I'd say.
There's not really much help I can give you with this, sorry for the useless comment but good luck in the longrun of this story :]
Wow. This was nicely written, but I would encourage you to use more details. I love details, and they really make a story. The prologue was very short, but it was also very emotional. I could relate to the pain of a broken relationship, and I was definitely disappointed that only one chapter has been posted so far. This seems interesting, and the story line is quite intriguing. I can't wait to read more.