I agree with Tobi. The only real complaint I have with your story, Anthony, is that the letters aren't really seamless. Or at least, not any longer. In the beginning they were. What happened? I still love this story, and I can't wait until they meet<3
I love how innocent and naïve Izzy is in this chapter. It's clear that Adam was being flirty in the last letter and now Izzy's confused by it, but reacting naturally. It's cute. I LOVE IT! I don't understand how you think you might not like it. You're amazing! Every chapter of this! And it's moving at a perfect pace. LOVELOVELOVEIT!
nooooooooooo i loved this chapter!!!!!! his letters are so nice and i love how they're getting more and more personal and intimate in a way. i love the letters and i think the chapter was wonderful!