April 4th, 2013 at 01:44am
This seems like a great story, I've found myself imagining the characters and spaces you describe. It's enjoyable, compelling and well written.
It's without a doubt, one of the best stories I'd gotten through comments swap. You shouldn't give up on it.
That said... Update!
Wow thanks! This is actually finished, it's a complete novel, I just never gotten around to posting the whole thing because It's a first draft, and a BAD first draft at that. But I will gladly post more of it if you so desire.