There's Nothing Sad About It - Comments

I love this idea and the characters, but I find the writing to be very blunt and slight. There is extreme potential, both in your characters and the concept, and as is I still extremely enjoy the story. But I think it would be so much better if you would elaborate some more. I love reading stories and feeling curious, but when those curiosities aren't answered, it can leave the reader empty handed. I'm not saying you need to change how you write - in my opinion, everyone writes well, and if they are content with the art they've produced, than it's perfect. But as a reader, I love detail. And more details in this story would just make me drool. My Lit teacher described good writing as not simply telling, but showing. And I guess that is all, haha.

Subscribing and recommending, and you best update soon! :D

I find the concept really interesting but also incredibly disturbing at the same time. I like that this is an original story (finding original stories that are well-written are scarce on mibba), the chapters are very well-written.

How did I just come across this? I love this idea completely, it is so so so original. And who knew I'd have a soft spot for the evil, psycho killers. Eh, I always do actually. Anyways, great chapters, can't wait for more!

Loved both updates! Sorry I didn't get to comment after that last one. I haven't really spent much time on here lately. :/
Hm... June. Why must the popular ones always give us a reason to hate them? Why can't they just be... nice? Or like, considerate of others?
Though then again, even if they were, there would probably still be people that hated them out of jealousy and all. :/
This is very addicting, and I can't wait for more! Very intense and suspenseful. :o

JUNE, WHAT A STUPID BITCH.
I, too, did not see that coming. I was feeling sorry for June and everything and even though murder is a little extreme, WHAT A BITCH.

Update soon, please :)

I love this, different from every story I've ever read. I can't wait to hear more about the main character, whose point of view we're reading from. Gah, I just love this!
Update soon please!(:

Wow, I just... Never saw that one coming.
Very good way to sneak that in there.
Update soon?

When I got to the ‘VOTE FOR JUNE CARTER, FIRST EVER PROM PRINCESS ON CRUTCHES.’ part, I was like "Wooooow."

I loved this update so much. Getting into Steven's world a little bit is good. Hopefully we'll see more of the others minds.

Totally picturing June Carter as TSwfit... Just like the way you described her I thought of Taylor...
Anyways, this is amazing! Kind of sent a few chills up my spine.

This is really incredible in like a sick twisted way. Or just really incredible, depending on the perspective. ;D SUBSCRIBED! <3

Nice update.

Poor June. I wonder why they killed her. It's scary to think "just because" is a reason.

The first chapter was amazing.

I've never really come across a story like this, so I've definitely subscribing :)

This is really, really interesting.
And it really makes me wonder about the person you truly are... XD Just kidding. lol.
But seriously, this is pretty twisted. I would've never predicted you writing something like this... but I really, really like it. Its definitely got me hooked.
Can't wait to see what all you have in store!
Definitely... subscribed! :D

Girl, you really got these updates coming! But I'm not complaining! I love this! I really hope you're going to get into more detail though.

First sentenced hooked me onto this story.
This story is so interesting, but it's disturbing at the same time. I can't wait for the next chapter though!

Also, I must add, Damian is hot.

Also, I must add, Damian is hot.

I love this so much. :D

Update. Now. Constantly. So I'm not bored.

This story is fabulous. Like, the way you write is amazing and the attitude of the narrator makes this so interesting to read. Update!

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YOU HAVE ME HOOKED LIKE A FISH ON THE LINE! I expect updates! AND SOON!