August 3rd, 2013 at 06:17pm
I did enjoy. I loved the way you put the lyrics into the story, fit them in in that way, made it into pieces of the dialogue and so on, oh, it was lovely. Shame I'm the first comment, you'd think it'd have more. It's lovely.
Hmm, anyway, I really like this, and I believe this is in a contest? Good luck! :) (I laughed at a few parts in the story, but the main one I can remember is when Marissa was mentioned and her dress was described. XD "Once a whore, always a whore. Even on her wedding day.")
I'll be announcing the winners later on tonight, so good luck!