My Heart Needs An Attitude Adjustment - Comments

  • sullenriotxx

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    I am not normally a fan of wrestling,but I reaally really like this.Do love John,hems a cutie. You are a very good writer.I like how the very beginning was detailed and painted a perfect picture in my mind of where she was and why she was there and what she was feeling at the time.Being the new Diva had to be nerve wracking and exciting all at once!I wish her the best.I hope you update soon!I am interested in where this story goes!!!
    August 9th, 2012 at 08:06am
  • SouthernAngel94

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    Yes I like the story as well please update !!! :))
    August 1st, 2012 at 12:31am
  • man overboard.

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    I do like this story, and the way you write. I don't really know anything about WWE. I sometimes watch MMA fighting, just because I take jiu jitsu. That's off the point. I think you should do a bit of editing on the phone- like Nathan Sykes said- and a few mistakes here and there. I like the story, though. Update soon c:
    June 27th, 2012 at 05:59am
  • Nathan Sykes.

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    Let's get down to business. There were a few spelling and grammatical mistakes. The font color is a little hard to read. But this seems like a good start all in all
    I know nothing about wrestling. Keep writing, cause this is good :)
    June 24th, 2012 at 10:23pm
  • esme_c.reads

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    I'm really liking this story so far. keep it up hope you update soon :)
    June 19th, 2012 at 02:51am
  • Color Mee Beautiful

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    I like it so far :)
    June 14th, 2012 at 01:57am