I loved this new chapter, it was like I could practically feel the heat coming from the water. I love this story and I hope you don't stop writing. Some people reading might be too lazy or busy to comment (I would hope so cause this story has so many recommendations.)
You know what I love most about this? The way you portray her pain so easily. When I read it I can really feel it, it actually makes me sad - but that's a good thing, because it means you're doing your job! You seem to let feedback, or lack of feedback, influence you heavily, which you shouldn't, because you're an incredible writer. You shouldn't let it affect you, you should just write because you enjoy doing it. Plus, I think with the amount of subscribers, and recommendations you have it's proof that people are enjoying your writing :) Anyway, this is amazing, and so are you. xxxx
Haha im in love with that movie for some reason so that part where they all got into it mad me smile! This chapter was great in every way! Really lovely writing!