Dark Side - Comments

@ onlythegooddieyoung
I'm glad that you have read it!
Your words and critique mean a lot to me and helps me want
to write more and write better.
Thank you!

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So I've never really been interested in One Direction, but after all of these fan fics I've been getting on here, I think I'd know them well enough to be their best friend! I'm not a huge fan of self-harm stories because most of the time is brought up a lot throughout the story, pulling away from what's going on. It happened a few times within long paragraphs that got a bit wordy, but that's my only critique. Other than that, you're a great writer.

Okay, so I finally got around to reading this story! YAY.

I just feel so incredibly awful for Lana. It's so clear that she's hurting and struggling, and she can't avoid thinking about her problem for more than a few minutes. I hope that Harry's able to get through to her and distract her a bit, and, eventually, get her the help she desperately needs.

I also adore how you're moving their relationship slowly and realistically. Even though she's attracted to him when she first sees him, she doesn't immediately fall in love with him or trust him, which is so true to real life. I LOVE stories with realistic relationships. Hahahaha.

There are a few grammatical errors throughout the story so far, but there's nothing that stuck out as REALLY bad. Hahaha. I can't wait to read more installments because this is really a great story so far. ^_^

@ We'll Be A Dream ;;
Aw thank you so much! :)

I love this!!!!

I love this!!!!

@ IrialOfTheDarkCourt.
I don't trust mine either! My sister steals my things all the time.
I'm going to throw her in a dungeon. :o

@ skinny love.
Well, I must be the exception to that because I don't trust mine. Lol

@ Aishiteruyo.
LOL the meme :D

The thing with siblings is that you've pretty much grown up trusting them.
Ah poo.

xx

@ blown away;
Thank you lovely!!
xx

@ Frozen December Moon
I love how you are looking at this from another angle!
Thank you for the comment! xx

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Liam, why can't you realize she's lying?!

Oh my god. Harry's starting to figure stuff out...
I can't wait to read more. Hope you update soon <3 I really can't wait to read more.

I liked this trouble. A little bit of a glimpse of how much Liam loves and trusts his sister, even when he shouldn't trust so much.

@ Frozen December Moon
Thank you very much, love!:)

I loved this chapter. It was so sweet.

@ One Erection
I am laughing so hard at your comment.
Thank you so much I'm glad you like it - and I totally understand
the Harry feels I get them so hard omg
Xx

@ Alcohol and Shame
Oh my gosh thank you so so much, it means a lot!:)

Hey! So I don’t usually read One Direction stories, but this was – is – well written! I’m very surprised and I love the way you’ve developed a character after a member of the band that isn’t a typical fangirl, which was something that pushed me off the 1D fics. You’ve definitely earned a sub and a recommend!

Hai, so like OMG I'm ugly sobbing right now because this story is amazing! I'm addicted and I need more! I'm getting them Harry Feels hardcore right now and I just need to asjfbajbfa!! I can't wait for more, this story is perf!!