Daddys' Little Girl - Comments

I also forgot to add that to read a story I have to have a decent layout, the spelling has to all be correct and the grammar needs to be just as good. You've got the three of those done properly and for that, I give you a good old pat on the back. Not many stories these days have those three things.

I also forgot to add that to read a story I have to have a decent layout, the spelling has to all be correct and the grammar needs to be just as good. You've got the three of those done properly and for that, I give you a good old pat on the back. Not many stories these days have those three things.

It's uh... Different but it's interesting to read!
Good job with the description/ Summary. It's really well written and I look forward to reading more.

Girl, you are fuck in the head... And I LOVE IT!!! :D its nice finally finding someone as messed up as me :P. And think of it this way, you might be fucked up for writing it, but we're just as fucked up for reading it... On a serious note, though, I really enjoy your writing style, and the way you've demonstrated Keira's attitude. Job well done!

Great start to this story :-)

Oh yay, I love it. Dirty little Matt. Haha I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Keep going ^^

I'm going to apologize for this long comment up front. Honestly I love your story, it has a great hook that completely reeled me in. There are some things that can be fixed, you have a small 'I' problem that you should consider fixing by replacing or adding a word in front of the I; but other than that I hope you don't quit because this is going to be a bitching story I'd love to read start to finish, please keep the chapters coming, I'll look forward to them. :)