I would just like to let you all know that I am the one who wrote this story, but for some reason was locked out of my account. That's why there's been no update. I'm so sorry!
I really like this tory. It was very cute and sweet of Harry to let Tori stay at the palace. Although I did notice a couple of very minor mistakes. Such as the Queen is referred to as 'Her Majesty' not 'Your Highness' like Tori first said. Well, I cant' wait for your next update and look forward to see how the plot pregresses :) please update soon!
Loved it! This one is a TON better than the first, the description adds so much! I'm glad to see that he's introducing her to his family! I can't wait for more!
I like the story so far. I like how you created trouble for Tori with the paparazzi,which is very realistic if something like this happened in real life. I like the beginning relationship Tori has with Harry, and I am interested to see where it will go. There are close to no grammar mistakes, so I am content with that, and the story is very easy to read. I do however have a few concerns. I feel like you should explain a bit why Tori lied to Harry about her name. I got confused as to why her name was Felicity and only then realized she was lying, but I'm still curious why she chose to lie. It's not a big deal, but I think it could make the scene easier to understand. And secondly, I don't fully agree with the dynamic you have with Tori and Johanna. If they are good friends, why does she ditch her friend to hang out with the Prince, even though I realize that it's realistic. I feel like the way you have created Harry's personality, he doesn't seem like the type to ignore another person,especially if its Tori's friend. Anyway, you can completely choose to ignore everything I've written because these are just suggestions. I do think this story has a lot of potential and I'm going to subscribe because I like it so far! :)) I'm looking forward to the next update, and I hope I've been of some help!
HEYY! I have to say I'm very much impressed by this version of the story rather than the first one. The attention to detail is wonderful. It's uunbelievable how just little details and descriptions just make this story that much better!! I hope that you will continue writting and I will be looking out for an update :)