Only Human - Comments

i love it soo much so far

All in due time ;D

Brilliant update.
I loved the description of the wind
And the wind. It blew all around us, hard and cool, teasing our skirts up around our knees, causing us to shiver and giggle each time a gust caught our hair.
It just sounds.... so like summer, I guess.
It made me feel like I was there

And now that I know what Hunter's problem is, I want to know why.

Ooh, I am really liking this!
I like that it's from Leyna's point of view (I had imagined it being Hunter's).
Please update soon!! It's really good :)

one question though - why does Hunter smirk? why is he sort of smiling at her? eeek i cant wait for it to continuer tout droit. XD

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Hunter seems like an ass.
I want to know what his problem is.
Please keep writing this, I feel I have to know what happens next.