Forever - Harry Styles - Comments

Oh one more thing, you might want to change the title so it doesn't say "Harry Styles one shot". The mibba editors don't like that, so you can just put it in the short description :)

Oh one more thing, you might want to change the title so it doesn't say "Harry Styles one shot". The mibba editors don't like that, so you can just put it in the short description :)

Oh one more thing, you might want to change the title so it doesn't say "Harry Styles one shot". The mibba editors don't like that, so you can just put it in the short description :)

Oh one more thing, you might want to change the title so it doesn't say "Harry Styles one shot". The mibba editors don't like that, so you can just put it in the short description :)

Oh one more thing, you might want to change the title so it doesn't say "Harry Styles one shot". The mibba editors don't like that, so you can just put it in the short description :)

Oh one more thing, you might want to change the title so it doesn't say "Harry Styles one shot". The mibba editors don't like that, so you can just put it in the short description :)

Oh one more thing, you might want to change the title so it doesn't say "Harry Styles one shot". The mibba editors don't like that, so you can just put it in the short description :)

Oh one more thing, you might want to change the title so it doesn't say "Harry Styles one shot". The mibba editors don't like that, so you can just put it in the short description :)

Sorry! There's just a few things you may want to go over: at one point Hazel says she's got on sweatpants, then a few lines later Harry's taking off her jeans. And I think Hazel says "my room" but the bed is "his bed". So just a couple continuity points. Other than that though, I really liked this. It wasn't awkwardly worded and it was a nice read :)

Sorry! There's just a few things you may want to go over: at one point Hazel says she's got on sweatpants, then a few lines later Harry's taking off her jeans. And I think Hazel says "my room" but the bed is "his bed". So just a couple continuity points. Other than that though, I really liked this. It wasn't awkwardly worded and it was a nice read :)

Sorry! There's just a few things you may want to go over: at one point Hazel says she's got on sweatpants, then a few lines later Harry's taking off her jeans. And I think Hazel says "my room" but the bed is "his bed". So just a couple continuity points. Other than that though, I really liked this. It wasn't awkwardly worded and it was a nice read :)

Sorry! There's just a few things you may want to go over: at one point Hazel says she's got on sweatpants, then a few lines later Harry's taking off her jeans. And I think Hazel says "my room" but the bed is "his bed". So just a couple continuity points. Other than that though, I really liked this. It wasn't awkwardly worded and it was a nice read :)

I liked this a lot. But there's a couple things you m

Okay usually I don't comment on smut because it either has no plot or sounds like a twelve year old wrote it. But I actually really like this. I've just begun my one direction (Harry Styles) obsession and I happened upon this. I wasn't gonna read it at first but I'm glad I did. There was an actual plot and I was sweet and Harry was so endearing he made my heart melt. And the sex scene wasn't uncomfortable or written badly, I really liked reading it actually! So, great story, I so enjoyed it!