Kiss Me Again - Comments

Love the story!! Can't wait for more! :)

Love this so much!!! Can't wait for the next update :)

Besides the grammar, this sounds like a great story. Can't wait for more. :)

Okay, I'm not really sure if you wanted a review but I feel like there's some things I should say that are purely meant as constructive critcism. First of all, you really need to remember to use capitalization, punctuation and proper grammar. There are no periods in the first chapter what so ever. The title should also be capitalized. You really dont need to explain that Jack is being used as a girls name because we picked that up when you said sister. I'm sure the plot line will be great there just needs to be a bit more attention to detail and you'll surely get a lot of subscribers. Best of luck!

Cant wait for more!!