The "I" In Lie - Comments

I just read this whole freaking thing and it was so so good but the end made me SO SAD WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME

so i've been lurking this story the past few nights, and did not comment on it. What to say? I really love this, I feel like its not your typical Pete Wentz story because Aly becomes strong without him. oh and the descriptions of the sex were...sexual. And by that I mean, amaazing :D

I really freaking loved this story I liked the whole thing specially how the begining was with her basically being okay he was married, what I really like is that you didn't make her one of them typical girls who believes he's going to leave his wife for her.

I've never actually read a story that was done like this one and I think this is my fave Pete story of yours, I'd really like to see more to this like a sequale I don't know for some reason the happy ending doesn't really seem to fit with the whole

"I could never say no to Pete

It just sort of makes me feel like there is more to come or ya know that she hasn't been fully honest with us..

I'd also really like to kind of know what was going through his head through all their fun times and after her picking Ryan, what I mean is like what made him pick her specifically why did he decide to cheat just how awful was his wife really...

Sorry this is so long and scattered just had a lot to get out lol

Much <3 Kat

I loved this story!!! :D
And the ending!! It was so damn cute!! :D :D

Awww! I loved this story, and I loved the ending. It was perfect, perfectly written and just the perfect end. :)

Aw! Even though Aly ended up with Ryan, I really liked how you panned everything out. You're an amazing writer!! Can't wait for more Pete stories!

This ending made me smile. It was so beautiful and ugh - you're the most amazing writer ever, y'know.

aww, the ending was honestly perfect. I knew they'd run into each other years later. once again, your stories never fail to amaze me.

I'm glad she chose Ryan to be honest. I just feel like she has too much history with Pete and I'm happy that they're both finally (hopefully) committed with who they're supposed to be. Great story! xx

I sense some last minute drama. I must say I'm a bit disappointed it wasn't Pete. But I love Ryan too.

at this point I feel like it'll either be: her and Ryan are all happy and in a few years she runs into Pete and its one of those things where they smile and say hi, while he thinks 'the one that got away' or it will just be pete in the end

I hope she ends up with Pete! I really, really do.

Oh wow!
I'm so glad her and Ryan are back together and happy!

I wouldn't have picked Pete.

I think she should pick Pete. He's sexier lol

I was seriously :o the whole time reading this chapter. I always felt like it wasn't his kid.

omg this is about to get more intense

oh snap!! I'm hoping that Ryan isn't the one that walks through the door! Then he's really going to be upset and leave her :( nooooo, I want her to pick Ryan!

oh crap!!!!! not good!! I hope Ryan comes in an kicks Pete's ass... That would be pretty badass. Just sayin'. I would be pretty happy if he did that. Haha. So... Yeah... I'm excited to see what happens!!!!

Shit is going to go down.