Incurable - Comments

Tardis, Spiffy? This isn't Doctor Who dear. haha :P

Yay updates!!!!

Hopefully James is ok. I like how Luke jumped when Tardis scared him. Hopefully her and Luke are ok on the trip to the Soo.

Awesome job! I love how she found her old friend. Hopefully he survives.

Left a bit of a cliff hanger there haha But it's still fucking sweet. I love how Tory was rather commanding. But now I'm super curious to see who the person she found!

And the System Of A Down concert will be fucking awesome!!! 6 days!!!!! :D

Definitely an interesting story!! Has me on the edge of my seat, and I'm looking forward to ore updates. Really creative plot, love the relationship between the characters, and how everyone works together for a mutual cause.

The only thing I noticed was some spelling errors and verb agreement ("The next morning, I awoke to banging on my door. I’m not even sure what time it is right now.") Gotta keep it all in the past.

But still, great job, hon. Don't leave us waiting too long for the next chapter!

"Stupid bastards were too slow..." hahaha That's awesome! I like how Luke tried to stop her from going out there and scouting the area. Tordis is really fitting in quite well with the others.

You're doing an awesome for this being your first story, Donnie!! I'm loving this so far. I love how she runs up and hugs her R-1 and acts like she's slaying zombies! That makes me chuckle :3

so do you guys want another chapter??

haha "Just to forewarn you, I sing in the shower" I don't know why but I like that line. I find humor in that! I want to see how the next chapter is going to fan out.

And my little brother, Kaleb, likes this. He was reading it over my shoulder.

Woah! Defiantly got my attention! It was awesome how you started it and I love Tordis's name, plus the layout really goes well with the mood of the story! The first chapter gave a great introduction to the story, and I can't wait to read more when it comes out! :D

(P.S. Thank W!ldFire for beinging me here, because she recomended it and I wanted to see what it was all about. ^-^ <3)

I want more! I'm excited to read this! It would be my first zombie story I think! And I'm glad it's my first! Update soon ! :D

I absolutely love this!! I'm subscribed already, of course, and can't wait to continue on reading it! If you need any more help, well you know how to reach me. It doesn't suck, this will be kick ass I can tell already!

P.S. HELL YEAH I'M THE FIRST FUCKING COMMENT!!!!! Sorry but that was neccessary! :3