Photogenic - Comments

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This is good :) Want to know what happens next

This is really good! Sometimes too much detail can make a story drag, but this one just makes it more interesting, although I wouldn't add in every detail of what they did since it's a little unneccessary.

I can't wait to read the rest of this, and it reminds me, im reverse, of a goosbumps story where this kid got a camera and it took pictures of what would happen in the future and it was always something terrible. But anyways, I'm subbing looking forward to the next update! =)