A Drabble A Day - Comments

  • TabbyKitty13

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    I liked that Mibba gave me a drabble collection for a change - they're nicer to read than stories; I digest them easier.

    Throughout, I noticed small things, but nothing to shoot trees over. In the last drabble, you changed your POV for a word (it went from first person to third for a moment). Unless I read it wrong...Dx

    On the 8th drabble, or Madison: Spanish Proposal, I couldn't help but notice that the character was referenced to as Riley. Was this originally in Madison's POV, or Riley's?

    I felt like your sentences flowed well, so I can't sit here and gripe about your grammar when it's already well-off. (: Other than the occasional misuse of a word, your spelling was spot-on, too.

    I like how you integrated a whole other story into this: the fan fiction within your drabbles. I thought it was a nice touch.

    You did really well with these, and I enjoyed reading them. (: Good job!
    July 25th, 2012 at 07:57am
  • MayaAngelou0524

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    Love the way you brought an older character in! Amazing!:-)
    June 29th, 2012 at 01:35am
  • MayaAngelou0524

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    Still loving it!:-)
    June 28th, 2012 at 05:22pm
  • MayaAngelou0524

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    Hi amazing chapter as usual, but I couldn't help noticing that the POV changed. Was that intentional? Great chapter!:-)
    June 26th, 2012 at 06:09pm
  • rozalogic

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    This is a wonderful idea! Would you care if I did something similar? :3
    June 24th, 2012 at 12:01am
  • MayaAngelou0524

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    Love the new chapter! Amazing!:-)
    June 22nd, 2012 at 01:14am
  • Cynical.

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    This interesting, hope to read more.
    June 21st, 2012 at 12:29am
  • i'm a happy camper.

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    I love this.
    June 20th, 2012 at 11:04pm
  • MayaAngelou0524

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    This is an amazing idea! And I love the music recommendations! Amazing!
    June 20th, 2012 at 10:50pm