I liked that Mibba gave me a drabble collection for a change - they're nicer to read than stories; I digest them easier.
Throughout, I noticed small things, but nothing to shoot trees over. In the last drabble, you changed your POV for a word (it went from first person to third for a moment). Unless I read it wrong...Dx
On the 8th drabble, or Madison: Spanish Proposal, I couldn't help but notice that the character was referenced to as Riley. Was this originally in Madison's POV, or Riley's?
I felt like your sentences flowed well, so I can't sit here and gripe about your grammar when it's already well-off. (: Other than the occasional misuse of a word, your spelling was spot-on, too.
I like how you integrated a whole other story into this: the fan fiction within your drabbles. I thought it was a nice touch.
You did really well with these, and I enjoyed reading them. (: Good job!
Throughout, I noticed small things, but nothing to shoot trees over. In the last drabble, you changed your POV for a word (it went from first person to third for a moment). Unless I read it wrong...Dx
On the 8th drabble, or Madison: Spanish Proposal, I couldn't help but notice that the character was referenced to as Riley. Was this originally in Madison's POV, or Riley's?
I felt like your sentences flowed well, so I can't sit here and gripe about your grammar when it's already well-off. (: Other than the occasional misuse of a word, your spelling was spot-on, too.
I like how you integrated a whole other story into this: the fan fiction within your drabbles. I thought it was a nice touch.
You did really well with these, and I enjoyed reading them. (: Good job!