Omfg I got really excIted whilst reading this story and started tearing up then I started laughing at myself. But anyways this is so good omfG isnsihdbdusuJjeieidnd!!!
I reallt, realy, REALLY Like this story already It's so cute and sweet and all :3 I followed you on Tumblr to keep updated with it :) Can you please update soon? I really like it :3
First, you mentioned Jimmy Eat World. I will love this story forever even if you totally fuck it up and I've only read the first two and a half paragraphs. (Thoughts of a fangirl right there, sorry!) I like how you've written this, all of Jack's thoughts, and I can definitely imagine him thinking these things :') It's a really interesting story so far, and I hope you keep it going because I'd love to keep reading it!