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  • Imperfectly perfect

    Imperfectly perfect (100)

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    This is actually really good. :L
    August 19th, 2012 at 10:18pm
  • SweetSugarRush_

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    Thanks :) I will do that more I know my writing isn't the best, but thank you I'm glad you like it :)
    June 22nd, 2012 at 01:38am
  • She Is So High.

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    Hey I think this is great, but When you do dialogue, every time a new person is speaking, you're supposed to treat that as a new paragraph. 0:
    Like...

    "Hi," Suzie says sarcastically, her eyes burning with the strongest hate as she glared at Dustin.
    "Hi yourself," he scoffs back.
    "*insert something suzie says*."

    xD yeahh. GREAT story though. Excited for more !
    June 22nd, 2012 at 01:35am
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