Illuminations - Comments

This chapter was amazing and sad at the same time. Can't wait til the next update :)

Oh my gosh this is so sad yet amazing I loved this chapter don't say it sucked! I think the torture will be good for her but she still won't budge.
Update soon!

Poor Damon.

I'm so scared. I hope she gets back to normal. It's gonna kill Damon until she is. Please update again soon!

I'M IN LOVE! I just want to keep reading! At least Damon is realizing that the worst has yet to come regarding dear Anya..

I do feel as if Damon is being selfish. But I'm definitely going to love some more drama :D

*Thumbs up* gotta love our dear old Damon....

Great update :D x

*Thumbs up* gotta love our dear old Damon....

Great update :D x

This story makes me want to fuck Damon more than I already do LOL.
I adore this! Update soon!

I love them. I need them to confess their love. I feel like they know they love each other but they haven't said it yet. They need to get it off their chest. Update again soon!

Ahhhhhhhhh!!!!! Im in love;D

@ Shattered_Mirror
No worries! I appreciate that you're reading closely. With an imagination like that, I hope you're putting it to paper! It'll take you places, trust me.

Haha thanks! Sorry if my comment and my extensive imagination disturbed you lol!

@ Shattered_Mirror
Ah I understand. The glowing eyes were the streetlights she'd see outside her window. Hope that clears it up! I'm glad you enjoy it so far. Thanks for reading! I appreciate it.

No worries, and you're welcome! I didn't mean to be rude, but somewhere in your story it said she saw glowing eyes in her room since she was little (I'm paraphrasing lol). But I still love your story, especially the way it starts out with thunder and lightening–it creates quite an atmosphere. It is a pleasure to read :)

@ Shattered_Mirror
He didn't even know she existed until just recently before he came to find her actually. I didn't think the summary gave off that message since no one mentioned that kind of assumption before, but that's an...interesting take on it, to say the least. Thanks for the comment! Sorry about the mix up with the summary.

From what I read in just the summary and the first chapter, Damon has stalked her since she was young. Yet, at the same time, he "always gets what he wants" and he didn't think she would be "any different." So, does Damon just simultaneously stalk a bunch of little girls as they're growing up–maybe to keep tabs on which ones he is going to have sex with? That whole aspect of the story doesn't really make sense to me.

On a positive note, your story is very intriguing! Aside from my confusion and a few spelling and grammar errors, I definitely look forward to reading all of it! You have great ideas :)

Best chapter yet! I love this story!!!

This was probably my favorite chapter!!!! (:

I dont think she knows shes in transition yet. Frankly, I'm glad he didnt say anything about it yet. I love those two. *sigh* I love when you update!