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  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Awe! It's cute and I loved it. Sad he's leaving, though. =/ Even when she knows what she's getting into, it's still going to suck to not have him around. Especially now that things are getting so....serious. Hehehe!
    June 25th, 2012 at 06:56am
  • Caitosaur.

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    Chapter 14: “We leave in five days, they set everything back and we have to get their earlier.” <-- there*
    June 25th, 2012 at 06:56am
  • jaseykay

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    Love it.
    June 25th, 2012 at 06:37am
  • Caitosaur.

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    Chapter 3: "She grumbled and wrapped her towel around her body before grabbing her phone. She stomped towards the house, picking her phone up as she did so. "
    I think I've noticed the slightly repetitive thing before but I think I thought I misread it. Just thought you should look out for that.
    June 25th, 2012 at 06:09am
  • Caitosaur.

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    Her twitter name changed from the first chapter to the second.
    June 25th, 2012 at 06:03am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I don't know that I could forgive him for cheating, no matter that he was drinking and drugging it up. Especially while she was in the hospital. Instead of wallowing in his guilt, he should have been at her side, trying to make it up to her (since HE felt that it was his fault). However, I don't think I could have stood it if they'd broken up and she'd been hurt even more. lol. So...I loved it :]
    June 24th, 2012 at 09:43pm
  • The Mini Monster

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    For one, I don't read stories, much less All Time Low stories. Haven't read in months. But I got the urge to read last night and was up reading this until two in the morning. Love the story, the idea is great, but I got to the end and was so very, very disappointed by the abrupt end of sexy time. ): Haha, oh well. Either way, keep up the great work, dear. :)
    June 24th, 2012 at 09:01pm
  • Wendy.

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    Ahhh! I can't believe she is just going to forget he cheated!
    And what about new boy? Seemed like there was a little more to that
    relationship, or at least could have been. lol
    I cannot waaaait for you to update!
    Please do it soon?
    June 24th, 2012 at 07:38pm
  • iizanna90

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    :D <3
    June 24th, 2012 at 06:36pm
  • itsaKAYDEEthang

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    I love this and am cheating on soo many other stories with this one bwahaha! I read it all this morning and my only thought at the moment is how I'm so excited for the next update (:
    June 24th, 2012 at 06:34pm
  • itsaKAYDEEthang

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    I love this and am cheating on soo many other stories with this one bwahaha! I read it all this morning and my only thought at the moment is how I'm so excited for the next update (:
    June 24th, 2012 at 06:32pm
  • bob morley

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    Good maybe that }ames guy will go away. Gah, I can't wait for more shit to go down. More? :)
    June 24th, 2012 at 06:22pm
  • jaseykay

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    Love love love
    June 24th, 2012 at 05:26pm
  • AllTimeBatman

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    Please update soon
    June 24th, 2012 at 03:44pm
  • KittyOpal

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    Hey just read this, and it's pretty awesome! I wonder if he'll ever figure it out, or if she'll have to tell him! More soon please!
    June 24th, 2012 at 02:15pm
  • myheartbeatsredwine

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    When's she gonna tell him omg.
    June 24th, 2012 at 12:55pm
  • SaraHorlyk

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    It's kinda funny. I'm not really a ATL fan, and I come into this story by an mistake, but I really love it! So would you please update soon? :D
    June 24th, 2012 at 10:58am
  • bob morley

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    AH shit. Alex, you're a dumb fuck. James, back off. Need more. Can't wait! :)
    June 24th, 2012 at 10:02am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Just read all of this and I have to say I really like it! Update as soon as possible! :)
    June 24th, 2012 at 08:26am
  • Wendy.

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    omg updatethisnowpleaseee?!
    I NEED to know what happens next.
    I hope Alex gets revenge, but I also want to know more about this new guy :)
    June 24th, 2012 at 08:14am