Well I did not mind two chapters :) The second last one was pretty good, with the emotions and everything. I could really see the scene in my head, which is great. I liked the justification for reaping her mother. I thought she would back down and I was prepared for disappointment, but I'm really glad she did it and that she thought of it like that.
The ending was superb. I like how it tied into the real storyline, with how she didn't want Dean to know anything. Castiel's thoughts about the future and cheating Death were also great. I think the ending was really well done. :)
Dude, I loved how you portrayed Death in this. He was written so well, and I could picture him so clearly. He is a BAMF. I love his character and also hope he comes back, and for more than one episode!
Really excited to see how the next chapter goes. It's really interesting! :)
Cas seems hilarious to me in this chapter. Possibly because of this part: Tonight, in approximately seven minutes.. It made me laugh, I could just picture his expression and Parker's too.