Children of a Lesser God - Comments

Absolutely love this! swap on mine? :P xo

Unf...I can't even. So worth the wait. And hah. Steve is right. Sorry Jetta love but you ARE being hypocritical.

Loved this and this comment does no justice but I have Shadows up my head demanding I update his fic...lol Love ya!

I absolutely love this story. It's so different from the other ones I've read, it's refreshing. You're an amazing writer:)

I really like this :)

I really love this. :)))

:) look! they are acting somewhat civil with each other! thats always a good sign.
And yus it was worth the wait :)

Aaaaaaaaaaaah yeah. Okay. Just one thing. You're not allowed to link images in the body of your story. You can link it in the author's notes though :)

Now onto the proper review. Oh...you also wrote 'ad' instead of 'and' in this phrase: while Bruce grabbed her file ad followed the other two.

Now to the proper review. Tony's such a rogue. I love him. Ooooh I love how she was able to feel Steve in the building and Bruce's anger. More and more intriguing...and seriously...I want to know the connection between Steve and Jetta. Did they use some of Steve's DNA on her? Or are they related somehow? [Though not sure how that would be logical...]

Yes, that does count! :D And Okay then. My statement stands. Best fic you've written, yet :D.

Um...wow...I don't know what she'll think of them now after they've sedated her... *shakes head* I really...and You have the Cap's personality down to a tee. Do you live with him or something? :P. He's so polite. Even when he's angry. Loved this chapter. Love this story. Can I even say this is shaping up to be your best story yet?

amazing. i really think all her JARVIS comments were hilarious

Had to mention Batman in the story didnt you?
Also, nice timing, i was getting my pitchfork ready and then noticed the email :)

I just re read this. I'm so excited for the next chapter!!! Update soon!!!

Coulson, Clint, Captain Try saying that fives time fast....with a lisp... :)
Kay, so have you read Maximum Ride? Cause it just occurred to me with the Part human part Avian.
And okay i'm back to thinking Steve has a stick up his ass, then again it was kinda hypocritical...
More soon? :)

I love this :) Keep writing, I want to know more!!! :)

Okay, he was a bit nicer in this one, I give you that.
GOOD! I cant wait!
I hope you update soon :)

I really love this story so far. You seemed to nailed Fury, the Captain, and everyone else's personalities really well. Jetta is definitely awesome too. Update soon.

Kay, Steve is nice...but kinda mean right now...
Yeah, I like that song, and thats partly where it came from, its also related to August Rush because i loved the way the guy sang "October Skies" and then it turned to October is for lovers...
and Just saying, but i wanna see her in action :)

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“You’ve never been to New York before, have you?”
“No, I’ve been here before; that’s why I’m so fascinated by the surroundings,” Jetta shot back sarcastically.

That really stood out for me as an example of the fine dialogue you have in this story so far :D.

I'm really intrigued by everything and want to keep reading. Give me more! Nao, plz! Lol.

Fantastic upddate I can`t wait to see Jetta in action and the capability of her powers.

Steve...Me like Steve...Steve Nice...
Now update soonish!
:)

Very good so far, I'm very interested so update soon! :)