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I love this. I really do. Foxface always intrigued me as a character, and I think you wrote her really well. I've been reading a lot of Hunger Games fanfic recently because I'm working on one myself, and this is definitely one of the best that I'v read. Great job! :)

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Naww, that was a very touching epilogue :'(

I think it should be chapter 6, not 7

Great chapter :D Can't wait for the next :3

Is it? God, it has been ages since I saw the rules, will try to space moar ;)

Just a heads up, there should be spacing between your paragraphs (it's a Mibba rule). You have a very interesting story though. I like how you interpret her character :) I'm particularly interested in how you're going to end this ;)

Your welcome :) And when it is out I can't wait to read it.

Thank you! I hope to have Chapter 2 out soon, but thanks for being the first to comment! ;)

This is really well written out. You took the little information that they gave you about fox face in the book/movie and made her minor charecter into a main charecter. Bravo :) oh and I am the first comment too.