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  • Lloyd Christmas

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    @ everdeen

    Wow. I really am still surprised when you guys say you cried at the end. I'm very grateful that you liked it so much. And the two of them/that movie was definitely an inspiring factor in writing this. And I just wanted to have that one story where it's not a happy ending, I don't know why but I like writing sad happenings in stories...
    Thank you so much for reading !!! Mr. Green
    November 22nd, 2013 at 06:37pm
  • everdeen

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    WHAT?!? I cried. I read the whole story in 1 day. Christine and Ryan remind me of Emma Stone and, obviously, Ryan characters in "crazy stupid love". They are so cute... Why this end had to happen? :(
    November 22nd, 2013 at 06:21pm
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    Ugh I think I'm crying.
    July 26th, 2013 at 10:53pm
  • CJWrites

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    I like the way it ended to....although...I wish she was still with ryan but that's okay. It was very bittersweet. Great story from beginning till the end.
    July 25th, 2013 at 03:22am
  • sjmoy

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    Wow, so that's the end.... Not what I was expecting at all. I would've loved if the guy she saw at the end was Ryan and then you left us at a a cliffhanger. We need some type of hope girl! lol

    Plz tell me you will write a new story. Continue somehow? Maybe months later? something?! I know I am being sassy....

    Anyways, Thanks for the great read<3
    July 25th, 2013 at 12:46am
  • melaniekgut

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    Okay, not the ending I was hoping for or even expecting, but it was exactly as it should have been. Nothing in this story is what I predicted it would be. I loved it from the very beginning.
    July 24th, 2013 at 10:17am
  • bxgurl95

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    I'm crushed OMG I don't even know what to say. That was quite a fucking story though, kept me on my toes and was way more prodigal/creative than 99% of what I read on here.
    Pure gold, can't wait for another one!
    July 24th, 2013 at 05:38am
  • S.Hemsworth

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    I hate you right now, how can Christine do this to Ryan?!?! Update soon, I NEED to know if they get back together, I'm so destroyed :'(
    July 7th, 2013 at 07:56am
  • bxgurl95

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    Oh my freaking god! This is not at all how I thought he prologue was going to incorporate into the story wow. Love love LOVED this! Can't wait to see what happens if their love carries on.
    July 3rd, 2013 at 05:19pm
  • sydnessx

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    Was waiting for this. Good chapter, sad to see the end but can't wait for the epilogue.
    July 3rd, 2013 at 08:37am
  • bxgurl95

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    Oh shit that was a game changer. Her friend's insane I can't wait to see another confrontation between them. I'm glad she spoke with her father and got a different perspective. She knows that Ryan makes her happy and he's trying so suck it up and talk to him!
    June 6th, 2013 at 06:09pm
  • mintandmelon

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    That was a major plot twist, I can't wait for the following chapters.
    June 5th, 2013 at 02:48pm
  • howtocatchamonster

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    Oh wow, what a cliffhanger! I wonder what will happen? Please update soon!
    June 3rd, 2013 at 08:43pm
  • RocknRollBlondii

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    gasssspppppp! NOOOOOOOO!
    May 23rd, 2013 at 03:20pm
  • bxgurl95

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    OMG it better not end with her leaving him since he doesn't get a chance to explain! I knew she'd see :/ ugh Why are all of these people trying to get int the way, I really can't wait to see what happens.
    May 23rd, 2013 at 12:50am
  • southernbelle_rene

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    This is my fave story on this site by far! Not fan of cliffhangers but I have no room to complain. Since I do the same when I write. That'd be awesome if you did a sequel! Very Happy
    May 22nd, 2013 at 11:23pm
  • mintandmelon

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    What's with you and the cliffhangers? I loved it, though and I can't wait for the sequel you said you would write. I don't think it's normal to get this excited over fanfiction but your writing is awesome so I think it's okay.
    May 22nd, 2013 at 10:10pm
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    @ mintandmelon
    Soon very very soon ! Wink
    May 21st, 2013 at 04:46am
  • mintandmelon

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    That's sweet of you to say. To be honest I am not sorry that you interrupted my schooling either, it was an awesome distraction. Keep updating and I promise you won't be able to get rid of me and my comments. Mr. Green
    May 21st, 2013 at 01:03am
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    @ mintandmelon
    Wow you're comment is probably the best I've read in like ever. Lol I could say sorry for interrupting your schooling but if it affords me awesome comments like this then I'm okay with that Mr. Green
    Thank you thank you thank you soooo much. You have no idea how encouraging and inspiring this message was, just the pick me up I needed.
    May 20th, 2013 at 11:09pm