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  • mintandmelon

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    Oh my goodness! I absolutely loved it and I think you are a gifted writer, your writing is so good it hurts, trust me. So I will keep this short because I was supposed to be studying (it's your fault, by the way) and I just want to encourage you to keep writing because you are extremely talented and the storyline kicks ass.
    May 20th, 2013 at 10:47pm
  • islands

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    love it!
    April 30th, 2013 at 01:57am
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    love it!
    April 30th, 2013 at 01:57am
  • sjmoy

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    Love the update:)

    Aww, I hope it doesn't end on a depressing note. I'm all up for realistic romances but let their be a happy ending! After some drama of course:P
    April 27th, 2013 at 11:32pm
  • Rough Diamond

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    Just stumbled upon this. I LOVE IT. Stayed up until 2am to finish reading. Update soon!
    April 25th, 2013 at 06:44pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Wait did I miss something what happened to the abroad trip program thing she was going to do?
    Also it wouldn't be a romance if there wasn't some jealous friend now would it. The end is near :'( say it ain't so
    ps. I read the prologue, you do have an eye for detail there mam.
    April 24th, 2013 at 12:32pm
  • vannabug3194

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    It bums me out that Maria is being so mean :/ but at the same time I can kind of see her view. She's being neglected. Can't wait to see what's next!
    April 24th, 2013 at 06:27am
  • vannabug3194

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    Please update this soon! Looooooooooooooved it!
    April 23rd, 2013 at 08:18am
  • sjmoy

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    When are you updating?! The story is sooo good Sad
    April 22nd, 2013 at 01:31am
  • SMshadows

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    So I FINALLY caught up with this story!
    Sorry I've been MIA...school and life in general make me wanna cry.
    ANYHOO! I had to re read everything just so I could make sure I remembered what was going on and just like I remember, I LOVE this story! I'm so stoked they finally did the do...is that pervy? Yes? I don't care! And Ryan trying to commit huh...? Idk, I like it but I sooo smell drama and I love it! HA! Oh also, Happy WAAAYYYY belated birthday!! Now...go update now! :p
    April 16th, 2013 at 06:35am
  • mskalliy

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    i just read this in a day....

    THIS IS AMAZING! can not wait for the next update!!!!
    April 11th, 2013 at 06:17am
  • howtocatchamonster

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    I just started reading this, and I'm already hooked! Can't wait till the next update!
    April 9th, 2013 at 08:33am
  • coolcat1224

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    ugh loved this so much you are amazing
    April 8th, 2013 at 06:02pm
  • bxgurl95

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    OMG IM SO FREAKIN HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    These two bring me joy :) I'm so glad that you updated waiting any amount of time for your updates are worth it. update soon, their relationship can't be all easygoing from here
    April 8th, 2013 at 04:54am
  • Golden

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    awwww, i honestly thought that was really cute. i love love loved the ending so much. for some reason the song stay by rihanna kept going through my head for this lol

    i can't wait for the next part especially after this ending c:
    April 8th, 2013 at 02:56am
  • ryguy1

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    So much to love here: I love the way you write their day to day interactions (and the intimate ones too) I loved Ryan's jealousy over Christine's gay friend. Praying Ryan doesn't get all angsty and fickle. I love them together.
    The only suggestion I'd make is perhaps keep specific descriptions about Christine's looks vague. Sometimes it takes one out of the story (or maybe that's just me? Lol) please don't take that as criticism though. I love your story. Thank you for updating! Looking fwd to the next chapter
    April 8th, 2013 at 02:38am
  • stuckinwonderland17

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    Loved this chapter. Ryan's ass better commit! Awesome stuff! :)
    April 8th, 2013 at 02:00am
  • ryguy1

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    Love this. Hate waiting for updates. ;)
    You're a great writer!
    April 4th, 2013 at 10:11pm
  • sjmoy

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    Oh, and I too agree with jazter. Plz don't make Ryan into one of those hit it and quit it assholes:(
    April 3rd, 2013 at 08:58pm
  • sjmoy

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    Happy bday! Loved the chapter. Hopefully Ryan will have some epiphany and realize that a relationship with Christine is worth the risk of heartbreak in the end. No regrets:)

    Oh, and goddamn the sex was hot. Yeah, more of that plz. lol
    April 3rd, 2013 at 08:56pm
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