Fire In Her Eyes - Comments

Dear authors, here we go again. :)

This one has a kick-ass main plot, I just loved the whole idea. I liked the character you created for her, and the two boss's she had. I liked how she got her revenge and the tragic end added more to the story. I enjoyed the different multiple POV's. :)

A bit of editing while adding description would turn this to a masterpice. Keep on writing. :)

OMG!!!!!!!!!! amazing!!!!!!!!! i cried at the end and i hate u for making me cry!!!!! but i love you again for making the story!

I was really crying my eyes out at the end! But it was a really great story! Please keep writing more stories and keep up the good work! Love you!

Cried so hard at the end. Sigh.

Oh my gosh! That. Was.. Amazing! I didn't expect that ending! Genius :)

OH MY GOD! I'M BAWLING LIKE A FREAKING BABY! IT'S SOOOO AMAZING!

OMG I started tearing! :'( poor Davis !

I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG I CAN'T WAIT !!! this waiting is excruciating

wow... what a chapter.

Haha girl knows how to get what she wants ;)

AAAHHHH OMG IT IS SOOOOOO GOOD!

GOOD!

wow. I love it!!

I L.O.V.E this story it is fantastic! That girl is full of surprises!

YES! I'm gonna laugh and he's gonna die and i'm super excited!

A walmart that. Sells bullets lol is this kentucky

Yea I'm curisous what davis looks like too. I'm really hoping he didn't kill him :/

That mother fucker. I'm going to jail, i'm gonna kill him. (I know it's fiction but OMG!) I am gonna go shoot some stuff now...

This is a really interesting story, something I'm not used to reading, I'm really curious what Davis looks like though?