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  • Lady.V.

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    Dear authors, here we go again. :)

    This one has a kick-ass main plot, I just loved the whole idea. I liked the character you created for her, and the two boss's she had. I liked how she got her revenge and the tragic end added more to the story. I enjoyed the different multiple POV's. :)

    A bit of editing while adding description would turn this to a masterpice. Keep on writing. :)
    February 11th, 2013 at 08:29am
  • I Love U

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    OMG!!!!!!!!!! amazing!!!!!!!!! i cried at the end and i hate u for making me cry!!!!! but i love you again for making the story!
    October 6th, 2012 at 12:05am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I was really crying my eyes out at the end! But it was a really great story! Please keep writing more stories and keep up the good work! Love you!
    September 18th, 2012 at 10:11pm
  • JaneeLovesLeto

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    Cried so hard at the end. Sigh.
    August 21st, 2012 at 09:57am
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    Oh my gosh! That. Was.. Amazing! I didn't expect that ending! Genius :)
    August 16th, 2012 at 06:12am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    OH MY GOD! I'M BAWLING LIKE A FREAKING BABY! IT'S SOOOO AMAZING!
    August 15th, 2012 at 04:51am
  • bxgurl95

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    OMG I started tearing! :'( poor Davis !
    August 14th, 2012 at 07:34pm
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!
    August 14th, 2012 at 06:02am
  • bxgurl95

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    OMG I CAN'T WAIT !!! this waiting is excruciating
    August 13th, 2012 at 04:21am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    wow... what a chapter.
    August 9th, 2012 at 04:57am
  • bxgurl95

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    Haha girl knows how to get what she wants ;)
    July 22nd, 2012 at 03:44pm
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    AAAHHHH OMG IT IS SOOOOOO GOOD!
    July 22nd, 2012 at 03:33am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    GOOD!
    July 4th, 2012 at 07:38am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    wow. I love it!!
    July 4th, 2012 at 04:23am
  • Sugarplum_19

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    I L.O.V.E this story it is fantastic! That girl is full of surprises!
    June 29th, 2012 at 07:16pm
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    YES! I'm gonna laugh and he's gonna die and i'm super excited!
    June 28th, 2012 at 04:29am
  • bxgurl95

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    A walmart that. Sells bullets lol is this kentucky
    June 27th, 2012 at 10:40pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Yea I'm curisous what davis looks like too. I'm really hoping he didn't kill him :/
    June 27th, 2012 at 02:19pm
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    That mother fucker. I'm going to jail, i'm gonna kill him. (I know it's fiction but OMG!) I am gonna go shoot some stuff now...
    June 27th, 2012 at 08:27am
  • AirickuhMeuh

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    This is a really interesting story, something I'm not used to reading, I'm really curious what Davis looks like though?
    June 26th, 2012 at 09:28pm
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