Payne in My Ass. - Comments

Wish this story was updated

Sorry it took me so long to get back to this story because trust me I was really excited to see you updated! As for the chapter itself, I definitely enjoyed it and can't wait to see what happens next! :)

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did you know how excited i was when i found out you updated. c;

Bitch, I missed you! I had to be very quiet the whole time reading this as I am in the school library. But yeah. It was great :) I can't wait for more. ♥

Your story is worth a wait, (:

YOU DON'T SUCK,. I LUBS YOU. akjlshdlkjahsdljahs this was hehe, so Liam. God, Liam is perfect, how?! xD aljsdlakjsdlajsflskdjgsldjg

Hon, you don't suck at this at all. It's absolutely wonderful. I'm really hoping you continue with this

I LOVE IT!!! But I really wanna know what's happening in the present, after he said that! But don't worry, no one's mad!! If we were, we would all be hypocrites!

Poor girl, seriously. She always tries so hard to bring him down and yet he's always the one to get the solo or whatever :D
Btw. take your time with the story, we all can get busy and I think your story is definitely worth the wait :)

I wouldn't blame her for holding such a bad grudge against Liam aha. I have no idea why, but I find each update extremely funny, maybe because of her frustration. But anyways, great update! :)

“Liam got it, sorry Elle.” Oh damn, she hates that line. Serious shit is about to go down again. Hahaha. I absolutely loved this update! Berry well done! :)

Love this story a lot!! :)

It's nice to see them getting along with each other :) But that Liam's statement about him always doing better just left me speechless, just wow! :)

Awww, "I was only trying to get your attention."

OKAY! I FUCKING LOVE THIS! It's one of the best I've read so far and thoroughly interesting. I cannot wait for your next update! I hope it's soon! Keep up the good work! (:

Oh my god that is one of the most terrible cliffhangers ever! I read all of this just now and dear lord, its amazing! :D

ksdfjklsdjflksdjfksjdflkjsd FUCKING LOVED IT. GAH! Now I have to go write so I can get to that part we talked about in my story xD

BTW I love his reasoning for doing better in everything. xD

I love the new bond they started. :)

This is pure brilliancy. Absolutely brilliant. I love the banter between Elle and her sisters. The only mistake I caught was how you spelled "Zayn". The I is supposed to be a Y. -A

One: LOVE THE OUTFITS.
Two: Amazing update, freaking Liam getting in the way all the time! And so what if she gets lead every time, you don't put her as an extra!!!! Give her Wendy at least. D'awww that would have been cute :)
Three: I LOVE YOU!