Close Your Eyes to See - Comments

HA the funny thing is every time I have met John he had smelled like beer, cigarettes, and mints. Right on point with that one.

no it's over! :((((((( I absolutely loved this story. You're such a good writer and always write lovely things

@ Hipsterism
Yah! That makes me happy! Thank you for reading. :)

I hate that this is finally over!! But I love that there's a sequel!! This is probably my favorite John O'Callaghan story I've read so far. Edie is such an amazing character and I love that I can relate to her. Pretty much any girl can relate to her because we all have our insecurities. I know I sure do! You are such a talented writer. You actually made me want to write, so I'm slowly working on a Joel Kanitz story. Nothing's posted yet, but I'm getting there!! I've subscribed to Stare Like You'll Stay, and I cannot wait to see what happens next with Edie and John!! Until next time!! xoxo

Well this was fucking awesome. I died when Edie told off her mother, it was perfect, this story is perfect. I'm so sad but happy it's ending. I loved the ending when John had to "take care of business" update soon please!!

Omggg ahhh

What?! only one chapter left?! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!

I JUST LOVE THIS STORY. I cannot believe there's only one chapter!!! You better believe that I've subscribed to the sequel. This has got to be one the best Johno stories I've read. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!

@ tessie
Ahhh! I have half of the next chapter written, life has been crazy! I will update by this weekend hopefully! Hang in there! :)

When are you going to update this story? I'M HAVING WITHDRAWALS!!! :P

But seriously, what do I do with my life now that this is over?

I love that you could put the story in third person and still show the characters' emotions clearly, that definitely takes talent. Great story! :)

These two are seriously just precious. And John keeping his promise just made me melt inside.

A SEQUEL?! MERRY CHRISTMAS TO MEEEEEEE. This is one of my absolute favorite Johno stories I've read in a while. Edie is so relatable and I love that about her. And all the fluffiness is perfect as well :) I'm looking forward to what's next!!

Literally cutest chapter to date!! I love that John loves her even if he hasn't said so yet :)

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This was my favorite chapter by far. John was so sweet and I love how he's going to prove to Edie that sh's special.

John.... you are a good man :)

Well, I fucking cried...it was beautiful and I loved it.

That was so hurt breaking then so beautiful, it's just... perfect !