You know once upon a time, this was my very first favourite Liam story, I think. It's just so amazing and sad and funny and it made me go on this emotional roller coaster ride!
....so does she ever get her bags back? Idk. That wasn't the ending I was expecting, though admittedly I'm glad it didn't end with her dying. THAT'S HAPPENED TO ME BEFORE. I'LL BE LIKE 40+ CHAPTERS IN AND THE AUTHOR WILL KILL OFF THE MAIN CHARACTER GIRL AND LEAVE ME A MESS. I'm pretty sure the most notable time I was like, 80 chapters in and they had her kill herself and I was just like "...what"
In the beginning, I was thinking, "Hell, please don't do his Mara." I was on the edge, believing it was all going to end on a sour note. But then, oh my, it was brilliant! Beneath the hard shell, Mara gave into Liam. She couldn't say no, I mean, who could! I love their relationship because it wasn't something easy. It was real. I think this was ended perfectly. Glad I read this. :)
I actually really appreciated the misspellings in the tests. Also. You should have it be two more chapters because then it'll end on 50 and be all nice and round and even.
Harry, oh he's just so perfect in this. He's in the middle of Mara and Liam. It's cute how he helps both of them out. And for Liam, I can't imagine what he's feeling right now. I can't wait for the last one, knowing it'll be brilliant :)
I can't get over how Mara is still the same moody chick since the beginning. I love how she kept her character unlike some other stories I've come across. She's very convincing and indeed human. Her character is much likely someone I'd run into. :)
Overall, I was in glee when I noticed that this was updated. I loved it!
Like I could hate you. I saw that there was an update of this on the like, main page of mibba as I was flipping through and looking for a new story to start and I nearly shat a brick. You're a human being and you're entitled to your emotions, and you were doing Nanowrimo so yeah you're not going to have time to update other things. If people give you shit they don't understand anything and I'll find a way to punch them through the internet. I just wanted to express that you were missed with ridiculous gifs in your story boxes. Sorry if they made you feel (too) bad for not updating.
I'm about to start reading this story and based on the last comment I'm kind of really excited and feeling really dumb for thinking I'll be able to stop reading it when I need to go to class.....
I'm just going to say that this story just fucked up my life. I don't wanna live anymore. So many feels. So manyyyyy FEEELLLSSS. Some good. Some bad. I don't know what to do anymore. This story is seriously a roller coaster that just won't end. Is she happy? Is she sad? Is she angry? Will she be okay? I hope things work out! She needs to be okay and Liam has to get back together with her. They were perfect!