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  • wish on a firefly

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    Okay I'm willing to admit that the summary was a bit long and while it was long, it gave out plenty of background information. I've only read the first chapter so far and I'm loving what i read so far. But my only draw back is the layout. I mean the brightly colored text against the whiteness of the default layout (or what's left of it) kinda hurts my eyes and the lack of the descriptions of the characters and what's going on around the characters makes it hard to imagine what's going on in the story. I understand that there will be more backstory and possibly more details in later chapters but going off this first chapter alone, I found myself being more drawn to what people would think of a famous rock star going out on a "date" with a random girl. But other wise, this was a great start to the story and I'm going to read some more a bit later.
    September 13th, 2017 at 08:47pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    @ Laylylu

    I'll have the first chapter up by the end of the weekend!!! I wanted to post sooner but work has been hectic.
    June 15th, 2017 at 02:25am
  • Laylylu

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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll
    Please! That would be great!
    June 10th, 2017 at 07:16pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    @ Laylylu

    I didn't even realize it's no longer posted... I did some shuffling around a few months ago and I guess it got deleted somehow. Would you like me to repost it??? I don't mind Mr. Green
    June 9th, 2017 at 02:40am
  • Laylylu

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    Sequel? :3
    June 4th, 2017 at 12:31pm
  • fantasygirltexas

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    I loved this story; and at the same time I want to kick Brian in the balls. I'm ready to start the sequel! Here I go....
    November 16th, 2013 at 01:16am
  • DaniGates

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    I loved this story so much! :)
    February 19th, 2013 at 06:40am
  • DaniGates

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    FIrst chapter has been read by me. I love it already. Brian is always portrayed as a man-whore. I love it.

    I will read and comment later. I'm off to bed. :D
    February 6th, 2013 at 07:18am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    @ Durch-Den-Monsun-87

    Thank you so much! And I'd love to have that link. I'm always looking for new stories to read. :)
    February 4th, 2013 at 07:50am
  • Durch-Den-Monsun-87

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    OH. MY. GOD!!!!!
    JSKLFJAS;LKDFJ;LASKDJF;LAKSD
    *flailing arms around*
    THIS STORY WAS THE SHIT!!!!!!
    My bestie sent me the link and I got to finishing it after only like...two days. I've been sick or else it woulda been one day or less. hehe.
    I can't wait to start reading the sequel! I loveeeeed this one soooo much
    And I just have to tell you that a brian fanfic I've been working on for awhile now you might like. It's just the relationship between Megan and Brian(especially when they start to fall for each other) reminds me of the relationship between Brian and the main girl, Braiden, in my one story. If you're interested in checking it out I can give you the link for it! The way they fight and stuff is so alike to how the girl and brian in my story act around each other that i just had to share! love the story!
    akjdflkajsdfka again LOVED this!!!!!
    February 4th, 2013 at 07:47am
  • let.the.flames.begin

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    Gosh. I just finished this. Bravo. I love this. Can't wait to go start the sequel!
    February 3rd, 2013 at 10:37pm
  • wowfairy13

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    Wow. I just read this entire thing in less than 3 hours... This story was honestly way better than I expected, I don't even listen to A7X! Seriously though, you are an incredible writer and the emotion was so real for me. I literally couldn't stop reading. Not to mention this is BY FAR the BEST ending to any fanfiction I've ever read. To sum up your story: Perfect.
    January 16th, 2013 at 07:22am
  • HanerJoy

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    Brian is sooo stupid :( he's gonna regret that!!! I'm looking foward to the sequel :D I loved this story :D
    November 23rd, 2012 at 04:31am
  • JustShrugAtlas

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    YESHEURES. I will now have something new to look forward too. :D I can't believe he's being such a poop head. He wants her. He just needs to grow up. So, yeah. My heart is in your hands. :D I know you'll shock me. And surprisingly, I didn't cry.
    November 22nd, 2012 at 03:21am
  • MoMo_92

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    Wow I wasn't expecting tht but I'm glad tht there is a sequel becuz I really thought Brian was goin to go for the relationship but he's not so I'm sad, can't wait for the sequel!!! :)
    November 21st, 2012 at 07:21pm
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    I think it was a good ending to leave it open for the sequel. Brian sucks for leaving her a note instead of telling her face to face. Lol atleast Zacky fed her for feeding the baby lmao. Looooved this story!
    November 21st, 2012 at 08:59am
  • trajadee

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    Absolutely loved this story! Can't wait for the sequel :D
    November 21st, 2012 at 02:48am
  • The Real Mitt Romney

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    YES. SEQUEL <3
    You really have no idea. I've said this before and I'll say it again, this has got to be the best story I've read in the entire 5 years I've been on Mibba. I'm actually happy that Brian didn't jump right into a relationship with Megan.
    And now I'm on to check out the sequel page!
    November 20th, 2012 at 09:56pm
  • Lexi Wombat

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    I love how you ended it, actually. I think it'll lead up to the sequel perfectly, which I'm ecstatic for, by the way. This has been awesome, I can't wait to see where the sequel goes (:
    November 20th, 2012 at 08:03pm
  • antivist.

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    I know, I know, we asked for it.... I KNOW, but dammit Brian!! I so fucking loathe you right now!!
    November 20th, 2012 at 07:13pm