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  • antivist.

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    This was a great update, although I really hate them seeing figthting :(

    About your relationship, I understand all the mixed feelings you must be having now, but I'm sure everything will work out with time, I have been in your place, maybe I didn't move there to be with him, but I was traveling every month and then every week, to see him, and when we were about to move together, it just ended. There are sometimes in which I wonder if it was for the best, but I guess everything happens for a reason, I'm sure you will get everything together, even if it takes you time, I mean for me it took me a year and a half... but in time, it all get better. And you're right enjoy your life, stop worrying about those things, just enjoy it.
    July 8th, 2012 at 10:20pm
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    I hate when they fight. And Mason almost caught them...

    I don't really know whose side to take on Jimmy visiting the mother of his other son. Which still pisses me off, by the way. The one time he slept with someone else, he couldn't have used protection?? I kind of have to take Rach's side because I know I'd feel the same way.

    I think that you should do what you think is best for YOU. I took a break from mibba for about 2 months because I just needed to take a step back and write for myself instead of other people. Then I came back, and felt a lot better. If you think you should do that, then do that. If you think that you don't want to ever come back, then don't.

    I personally love this story and your writing style and I would be heartbroken if you stopped it. That said, the only thing that matters is that you do what's best for you.

    Update soon :)
    July 8th, 2012 at 10:14pm
  • SaraHorlyk

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    I hate them fighting :/
    - but update soon again, okay Hun? You make it worth reading fan fics!

    And then I think you should do what your heart tell you to do - as cheaky as it sounds.
    Of course I would want you to kwep writing, but girl you have to follow your heart.

    And you live in Sweden? Wow I thought you were American, well anyway, go Scandinavians then :P

    but remember, a lot of us will support you in whatever you decide to do :)
    July 8th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • SaraHorlyk

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    I hate them fighting :/
    - but update soon again, okay Hun? You make it worth reading fan fics!

    And then I think you should do what your heart tell you to do - as cheaky as it sounds.
    Of course I would want you to kwep writing, but girl you have to follow your heart.

    And you live in Sweden? Wow I thought you were American, well anyway, go Scandinavians then :P

    but remember, a lot of us will support you in whatever you decide to do :)
    July 8th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • Jade Vengenz

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    I hate them fighting... :c
    July 7th, 2012 at 09:11am
  • antivist.

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    Jimmy!! you little prick! xD
    haha this was an awesome chapter

    Now I know how things might seem hard, and whatever you decided to do, well it's what you have to do, and it's okay. Ignore all the negative comments you might get and act on the feedback you get.
    Your stories are awesome and you're a great writer so whatever you decided to do, I hope gives you peace.
    July 7th, 2012 at 01:11am
  • Adventure Time.

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    I think Jimmy's date wins...just saying :)

    Aww poor Rachel. I would get SO mad if my boyfriend/husband told his friends that I pissed myself.

    And ignore all the people who say mean things to you. First, they obviously are jealous because writers stick together and give feedback/constructive criticism. Unless a great author is a complete douche, you don't see them telling other people that their writing sucks. Second, you can't make everyone happy. But you can strive to make other people happy by doing something that you love, like writing. You're a fantastic writer; don't let anyone get to you.

    I loved the chapter, update soon :)
    July 6th, 2012 at 09:26pm
  • Spoileddxbrat

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    No ): contuine writing. :) you're a really good writer :$
    July 6th, 2012 at 09:15pm
  • Adventure Time.

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    THANK GOD! YOU MADE SOMETHING HAPPY!!! :'D

    Yay! Jimmy and Rachel bonding time! I wonder what she's gonna do for her date...hm.

    Update soon!
    July 3rd, 2012 at 01:06am
  • antivist.

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    Finally some happiness here! Well Jimmy loves drumming and videogames, c'mon he is a man, he would be happy if you play videogames with him all day or you bring him some of his favorite drummers. lol .... I want Rach to win! xD >.<
    July 3rd, 2012 at 12:16am
  • SaraHorlyk

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    Updatw again, okay? :'D
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:39pm
  • Spoileddxbrat

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    Yay no more fighting :) good update
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:33pm
  • Adventure Time.

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    Fuck you're killing me. Stop making Jimmy and Rachel fight! I completely blame this on you! You're the one that's writing this! (glares)

    But I'm going to keep reading because it's going to be a happy ending. Right? Right. So keep updating because you're stressing me outttttt

    Update soon please :)
    June 30th, 2012 at 10:02pm
  • antivist.

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    How can you ask em to cheer with this chapter! I wanna cry, I fel bad for Rach, I know she is scared but she has to stop pushing Jimmy away... and Jimmy needs to stop acting like a douche (I love you, Jimmy I do, but you're acting a bit douchey today) So work your shit out you two and be happy!! .-. You're killing me, just so you know.
    June 30th, 2012 at 08:44pm
  • antivist.

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    Oh shit!! A WEEK!?! I'll die... And then I will continue reading in zombie mode. I know, I KNOW they can work their shit out. :D

    Have fun in Australia! ^^
    June 21st, 2012 at 09:11pm
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    YAY! IT ENDED WELL! I hope everything goes well.

    And I'm still mad at Jimmy for having another kid, even though Rach forgave him. I didn't. But I probably will if everything goes well cause I can't stay mad at him hahah
    June 21st, 2012 at 09:11pm
  • Jade Vengenz

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    Awww... I hope everything works out.
    June 21st, 2012 at 09:03pm
  • ILovePotatoes

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    :( I want everything to be ok too
    June 21st, 2012 at 09:03pm
  • NikkiTheLastPlague

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    :) must read more *zombie-like*
    June 21st, 2012 at 03:17am
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    Oooh fuck. I have a feeling this isn't going to end well...

    Update soon please!
    June 20th, 2012 at 05:27am